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#1 (permalink) Sat Nov 14, 2009 9:57 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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There is an old Chinese saying that goes; "Only under the lead of strict parents or teachers will children behave themselves and study hard." It is a paramount belief of many parents and teachers. In ancient China, teachers even had the right to beat their students when they did not study hard or obey them.
Time past, this kind of conception and idea has totally reversed by exchanging teaching experience and knowledge with foreign countries. From my point of view, students will be more effective and willing to learn when they encounter patient and kind teachers.
Students, especially elementary pupils, are more prone to listen to those teachers who they like, and study hard on subjects taught by teachers they are fond of. For example, just like myself, I listened carefully on English classes in fundamental school, thanks to the beautiful and kind English teacher I had at that time. She was always patient on every questions I asked and kept smiling. I liked her a lot, so each English class, I behaved myself, and paid attention to every words she said, just to leave her a good impression on me. And I was very good at English subject that time, simply because I liked the teacher, which encouraged me to study hard.
It seems that students are afraid of strict and serious teachers, so they are lean to keep quite in the classes taught by those teachers. But they just keep quite, which does not mean that they listen or follow the teacher, and they may even do not think in class. That definitely does not do any good to lift up the efficiency of studying. Simply letting students obey the teachers is an old and past education style, which will just cultivate the youngs without independent thinking or any ideas about themselves.
To sum up, kind and patient teachers is the best choice for students, with whom students are more likely to study hard and behave themselves. Whilst, teachers who keep serious and strict will just bring us so-called "good students". Many many many thanks!!!
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Anniehal You can meet me at english-test.net

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#2 (permalink) Sat Nov 14, 2009 20:19 pm an essay a day:should teacher be kind or strict?(til nov 21th) |
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Annie, your best essay to date.You should get good marks for essays of this calibre.
Kitos. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#3 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 0:37 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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Hi Anniehal Hope to hear from you even after passing the test. we should keep learning. I quite agree with Kitos. _________________ Global Marketing |
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Richard I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:03 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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| Richard_Jack.c wrote: |
Hi Anniehal Hope to hear from you even after passing the test. we should keep learning. I quite agree with Kitos. |
Yes, I will!! Hope one day my English could be good enough to help you revise the essays of others! |
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Anniehal You can meet me at english-test.net

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#5 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:31 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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Hi Anniehal,
Thank you for your nice essays. I have read some of your essays, and I wish I could write nice essays as your. _________________ Hoadong |
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Hoadong I'm here quite often ;-)

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#6 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:23 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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| Hoado wrote: |
Hi Anniehal,
Thank you for your nice essays. I have read some of your essays, and I wish I could write nice essays as your. |
Thanks for your compliment! But there's still a long way to go... Otherwise it will be hard for me to understand the teachers in class. Are you planning to study abroad? |
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Anniehal You can meet me at english-test.net

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#7 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:43 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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Thank you for your reply. No, I am not planning to study abroad. But I like English. The reason I study English is I want to read books, news and write essays in English. Your essays make a strong impression on me about your ability of writing. Wish you the best. I agree with Richard. "Hope to hear from you even after passing the test. We should keep learning." _________________ Hoadong |
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Hoadong I'm here quite often ;-)

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#8 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:01 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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| sure!i will keep coming back!you know,it's such a wonderful forum!! |
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Anniehal You can meet me at english-test.net

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#9 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 6:12 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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| Anniehal wrote: |
| sure!i will keep coming back!you know,it's such a wonderful forum!! |
Hi Anniehal,
Thank you. Yes, you are right about "it's such a wonderful forum!!" I have learned a lot from teachers and other students on this site. Do you know what? This morning I started saving your essays and others' essays by typing them. I think this can help me to learn English, both writing skill and grammar. My son, who is in class 4 has a dictation to develop his Vietnamese. I do same him with English because I think it is one of good ways to learn English. I try to take 3 new test and save from 2 to 3 essays every single day. What do you think about this?
By the way, I like the way you put quotes on your essays to support your main ideas. I do it sometimes, but my English is still very bad, and I don't know many quotes.
Hoa _________________ Hoadong |
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Hoadong I'm here quite often ;-)

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#10 (permalink) Sun Nov 15, 2009 14:03 pm TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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| Hoado wrote: |
| Anniehal wrote: |
| sure!i will keep coming back!you know,it's such a wonderful forum!! |
Hi Anniehal,
Thank you. Yes, you are right about "it's such a wonderful forum!!" I have learned a lot from teachers and other students on this site. Do you know what? This morning I started saving your essays and others' essays by typing them. I think this can help me to learn English, both writing skill and grammar. My son, who is in class 4 has a dictation to develop his Vietnamese. I do same him with English because I think it is one of good ways to learn English. I try to take 3 new test and save from 2 to 3 essays every single day. What do you think about this?
By the way, I like the way you put quotes on your essays to support your main ideas. I do it sometimes, but my English is still very bad, and I don't know many quotes.
Hoa |
You have a son now!He's so lucky to have such a deligent mother! I think that reading essays is useful, but it would be much better to read those written by native speakers. You know, I still make a lot of mistakes.
About quotes, I know some in Chinese, so just simply translate them into English.Sometimes, I still make by myself...for the sake of getting higher score,you know.. You are from vienam?In my mind, women there are really beautiful!! |
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Anniehal You can meet me at english-test.net

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#11 (permalink) Mon Nov 16, 2009 1:18 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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Thank you Anniehal. Yes, you are right that reading essays is useful, especially reading those written by native speakers. I have been trying to read as much as I can.
Yes, I am from Vietnam. In my point of view, everywhere has beautiful women. :) _________________ Hoadong |
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Hoadong I'm here quite often ;-)

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#12 (permalink) Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:10 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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Vahan I'm new here and I like it ;-)
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#13 (permalink) Mon Nov 16, 2009 10:28 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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:) _________________ Global Marketing |
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Richard I'm a Communicator ;-)

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Richard I'm a Communicator ;-)

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#15 (permalink) Mon Nov 16, 2009 11:17 am TOEFL essay a day: Should teacher be kind or strict? |
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[quote="Richard_Jack. from my point of view,...[/quote]
Thank you Richard very much for correcting my mistake. I remember it now, "from my point of view" not "in my point of view".
From my point of view, you are a nice friend. I am happy to meet you here. :D
Have a nice time! _________________ Hoadong |
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