Grammar: In developing country, the most important thing is the way how...

[Junpi]

In developing country, the most important thing is the way how to develop in firm foundations.And a good education system is the firm foundation . This essay will discuss why education is the single most important factor in the development of a developing country.

Firstly, in real, people can live without education but education is a fast way to help people improve knowledges and experiences.Basic education provides people with a greater understanding of basic daily information about life as well as of their own potential. A country with a strong education system can more definitely develop in the future.In developing country,improving people's knowledge is very important because their attitude can be influence on development of country.It is necessary to invest in education because children will be laborer in future. If they work without education, this could be wasting a lot of resources and lead their country to go down.

Secondly, in all countries especially developing countries, government should run their country by themselves.So developing education is the best way.There's a famous saying "If you give a man a fish you feed him for a day, if you teach the man to fish you feed him for a lifetime".In some countries, the government invests a big part of the profits in weapons but it's really waste time and money. The long investment is in education.With a good education system, people can study easily, they can overtake the newest technology then they apply in their life.

To sum up,education factor in developing country is the single most important.It's a firm foundation for most countries especially developing country.

[Bullet_Bang]

I'm not good in English. I like to learn good English from this forum. However, your essay doesn't sound smooth to me. I tried to write your introduction in my way. Lets see how others perception is going to be?

"As for a country in the third world nations , the way how it develops its infrastructures is very important , and one of such basis which requires more attention is the nation's Education system. In the following paragraphs , the required emphasis on the Eduction System of a developing country will be reasoned "