Important technological innovation

[Aghmore]

Hi dear Kitos
I hope this essay is better than the second one. What do you think?

Topic: Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.


In our volatile world, there are several innovative discoveries and inventions which have introduced to our societies. But only a handful of them are synonymous with superior ones. Internet is on of the miracles of human's technological innovations. Almost all of future generation compulsorily might benefit from its educational, traditional, and informational aspects.

It is impossible to imagine our world without education. As a matter of fact, today's world needs all people even rural residents to have a required level of education. On the other hand, it goes without saying that, founding educational centers for all people of society need such a plenty of funding that even a rich country can not afford it. But when it talks about virtual universities, the first thing that comes to mind is its inexpensive situations. All people in every time they desire and in everywhere can attend in virtual classes of those universities. The next important outcome of Internet is virtual libraries. All people not only students can use them conveniently.

Development of our world is based on national and abroad commercial relations. Appearance of e-commerce websites and advertisements on them are so important that several entrepreneurial persons have attracted to founding them. Everyday millions of dollars are traded through Internet. Buying nominal membership fee of websites and selling second-hand furniture to trading expensive commodities are done in Internet easily and vastly. It saves money and time as well.

Information services and electronic communication without any doubt are one of the best performances of Internet. There are websites that serves their members with e-mail services. All academic centers have exclusive e-mails, too. With e-mail and chat rooms the limit of distance is to some extent is meaningless. There are several public informative forums. All can share their experiences with others. A student can ask there about problematic questions from his peers in other places of the world. All of these are the unique aspects that Internet bestows them on us.

All in all, there is no doubt about it that Internet is the most useful, convenient innovation that has ever appeared in the world of education, tradition and information.

TOEFL listening discussions: What will the student probably do with her next paper?

[Kitosdad]

Hi dear Kitos
I hope this essay is better than the second one. What do you think?

Topic: Advances in transportation and communication like the airOplane and telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.


In our volatile world, there are several innovative discoveries and inventions which have BEEN introduced INto our societies, but only a handful of them are synonymous with superior ones.
THE Internet is onE of TODAYS miracles of human technological innovations.
Almost all of future generationS MAY benefit from compulsory educational, traditional and informational aspects.

It is impossible to imagine our world without education. As a matter of fact, today's world REQUIRES all people, even THOSE rural residents, to have a MINIMUM level of education.

On the other hand, it goes without saying that founding educational centRES for all people IN society, CALLS FOR plenty of funding, EVEN MORE THAN A RICH COUNTRY COULD AFFORD.
But when it COMES TO talkING about virtual universities, the first thing that comes to mind is its LOW COST.
PEOPLE EVERYWHERE COULD ACCESS THESE UNIVERSITY BASED LIBRARIES ANYTIME THEY CHOSE TO.
All people, not only students, COULD use them conveniently.


THE development of our world is based on national and FOREIGN commercial relations. THE appearance of e-commerce websites and advertisements on them are so important that several entrepreneurial persons have BEEN attracted INTO founding them.
Every day millions of dollars are traded through THE Internet.

Buying nominal membership feeS of websites, and selling second-hand furniture, to trading expensive commodities are done in THE Internet easily and FREQUENTLY.
It saves money and time.

Information services and electronic communicationS ARE, without any doubt, one of the best perforFORMERS of THE Internet.
There are websites that serve their members with e-mail services.
All academic centers have exclusive e-mails, too. With e-mail and chat rooms the limit of distance is NOW meaningless.
There are HUNDREDS OF FREE, public informatiON forums.
All can share their experiences with others.

A student IS ABLE TO SEEK ANSWERS TO problematic questions from his peers in other places AROUND the world. All of these are the unique aspects that THE Internet bestows on us.

All in all, there is no doubt about it that THE Internet is the most useful, convenient innovation that has ever appeared in the world of education, tradition and information.
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A well thought-out essay my friend. You continue to improve. Please relax and do some more reading.

Kitos.
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[Aghmore]

Dear Kitos

Thanks a lot. Your comments and advice are really kinds of invigorating fresh air which blows into my spirit.

I'd really appreciate your notifications.

[Kitosdad]

And so you will get them dear friend.
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