TOEFL® essay: Causes and effects of global warming

[Junpi]

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Nowadays,in many countries,there are many problems about environment. Global warming on the earth is becoming more serious. This essay will discuss the causes and effects of global warming.

One of the main causes of global warming is carbon dioxide emissions.My point is about the way people pollute the environment.All human activities in real life such as using cars,burning fuel result in increasing carbon dioxide emissions. Because carbon dioxide emissions comes from the burning of gasoline in internal-combustion engines of cars and it also comes from the burning of fossil fuel such as oil, natural gas and coal for the purpose of electricity generation.

In addition,many industrial companies are developing at a high rate.Emissions from them are toxic and it's difficult to settle toxic product.Moreover,most of emissions were left on the river or where people live.This pollutes water sources and habitat.

Second cause is methane which is cause of greenhouse effects.Rate of natural methane is higher than methane from industry and natural methane is icelike combinations on the sea floor.Drying water can increase methane on the earth.When methane escape the sea,it can exist long time in the air and can becomes carbon dioxide.

Then, we can examine some effects of this problem

The first effect is climate change.The summer is longer and hotter,the winter is shorter and colder.This leads to habitat change.Ices melt because of higher temperature.Some islands disappear by covering by water.For example, in Italy, cities are sinking as the sea level rises.

In addition,people's health can be threaten.Global warming results in spread of disease.As countries warm, disease carrying insects migrate, bringing plague and disease with them.

In conclusion, global warming is becoming more serious.Countries throughout the world have agreed to a treaty called the Kyoto Protocol to help limit it.Last at least,people should change activities which harm the environment.

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[Kitosdad]

Nowadays, in many countries, there are many problems CONCERNING THE environment. Global warming on the earth is becoming more serious. This essay will discuss the causes and effects of global warming.

One of the main causes of global warming is carbon dioxide emissions.

My point is about the way people pollute the environment. All human activities in real life such as driving cars and burning fuel all result in increasing carbon dioxide emissions.

Carbon dioxide emissions comes from the burning of gasoline in the internal-combustion engines of cars, and it also comes from the burning of fossil fuels such as oil, natural gas and coal for the purpose of electricity generation.

In addition, many industrial companies are developing quickly .Emissions from them are toxic and it's difficult to neutralize toxic products.
Moreover, most of the emissions are released into rivers or where people live.This pollutes water sources and endangers wildlife habitat.

The second major cause is methane, which is another contributor to the greenhouse effect.
The formation of natural methane is higher than methane emanating from industry, and natural methane in ice-like combinations lies on the sea floor.
Evaporating water can increase the volume of methane on the earth. When methane escapes from the sea, it can exist for a longer time in the air and can become carbon dioxide.

Now, we can examine some effects of this problem
The first effect concerns climate change.
The summer is longer and hotter, whilst the winter is shorter and colder.
This leads to habitat changes.
Ices melts because of higher temperatures.
Some islands have disappeared from being covered by water.
For example, in Italy, cities are seen to be sinking as the sea level rises.

In addition, people's health can be threatened.
Global warming results in the spread of diseases.
As countries become warmer, disease carrying insects migrate, bringing plague and disease with them.

In conclusion, global warming is becoming ever-more serious.
Countries throughout the world have agreed on a treaty called the Kyoto Protocol to help limit it.

Last, but not least, people should change activities which harm the environment.
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Your most interesting essay so far Junpi. Well done.

Kitos.
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[Junpi]

yeah.I will try more.Thank Kitodas.
but I don't understand exactly what you mean " Your most interesting essay so far." .It means : I need try more to write better essay, right?? :D

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Junpi, :) ... NO, it means that I think that this is the best essay you have written to date.

I'm sure that you will do even better in the future.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Junpi]

[Boycott]

as you know that the world is covered with 1/4th of land and 3/4th of water. If it continues to global warming then the glaciers and ice in the polar regions tend to melt. thereby increasing in the level of water. so the people will not have place to live.
Nowadays many skin cancer patients are high than the 1900's
many soils are not available now.
almost 50% of the trees are destroyed.
soil,land,water is being polluted.
algae and other living organisms in water are destroyed.
many deaths due to increase in temperature. nowadays we're seeing many died to sun stroke.
variation in climate.
http://www.globalwarmingsurvivalcenter.com/