What do you consider to be the most important room in a house?

[Kleopatra]

What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? why is this room more important to you than any other room? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

Preferring certain room at home depends on person’s stance in family. According to my observations, fathers like living-room to watch television, while mothers prefer to spend time in the kitchen. Unlike parents, in general young members of the family like me prefer their own room. Because we can read there whenever we want, can work into computer and can relax.

First of all, my own room is a study place for me. In fact, I am preparing for the TOEFL test and I need to read aloud and to practice speaking section of the Toefl test. No doubt, these activities make noise in the room. If I practice my tasks in any other rooms, I can disturb others. So, my room is the most appropriate place to read and practice English or any other subjects whenever I wish regardless of night or daytime.

Another point to be mention is that, working into computer until midnight which is a very necessary requirement for my classes, is only possible in my own room. Sometimes I stay up late at night searching articles and information through internet, because computers provide access to more information than books. So, it makes me be awake until midnight. In contrast I am not able to implement these commitments in any other rooms at home.

The last and the most important or unique quality of my room is that I can relax there. It is a place for me to cool down when I am angry. I can relax here after the stress of continual studying.

Personally, I would say that my own room is the most important place for me in our house. I can read there without bothering others, can supplement internet materials to my study or research and even can relax there. I believe that “the road to success lies in studying only in my own room than other parts of our house.”

Kitos please check this essay and give me point out of 5. i m trying to reach 5 :)
but i dunno how well i do. by the way my name is Aynur. thanksss so much in advance Kitos.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor on the possibility of life on Mars

[Kitosdad]

Preferring A certain room at home depends on A person’s POSITION in THE family.
According to my observations, fathers like THE living-room SO THAT THEY MAY watch television UNDISTURBED, while mothers prefer to spend time in the kitchen.
Unlike parents, in general young members of the family prefer their own roomS, because we can read there whenever we want, OR work ON OUR computerS and relax.

First of all, my own room is a study place for me. In fact, I am preparing for the TOEFL test and I need to read aloud and to practice THE speaking section of the Toefl test.
No doubt, these activities make noise in the room.
If I WERE TO practice my tasks in any other rooms, I WOULD disturb others, so my room is the most appropriate place to read and practice English or any other subjects, whenever I wish, regardless of THE TIME OF DAY.

Another point to be mentionED is that, working ON THE computer until midnight, which is a very necessary requirement for my classes, is only possible in my own room. Sometimes I stay up late at night searching articles and information through THE internet, because computers provide access to FAR more information than books.
So, it KEEPS me awake until midnight. In contrast I am not able to implement these commitments in any OF THE other rooms at home.

The last and the most important or unique quality of my room, is that I can relax there. It is a place for me to cool down when I am angry. I can relax here after the stress of continual studying.

Personally, I would say that my own room is the most important ROOM for me in our house. I can read there without bothering others, can supplement internet materials to my study or research and relax there. I believe that “the road to success" lies in studying only in my own room RATHER than IN other parts of our house.”

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Good afternoon Aynur, again this is a good essay and I would award you 4/5 for this work.
Both your spelling and sentence structure are perfect, and the only way to a perfect score is to use far more sophisticated vocabulary. This takes a very long time to learn, and to be perfectly understood in its correct usage.
Personally I think you are doing very well indeed, but if you wish to add this further burden to your workload, then that is your decision.
I would think that your parents are very proud of your performance, and it would be folly to expect you to achieve perfection in such a short space of time.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Kleopatra]

THANKSSSSS so much dear Kitos. i am thankful to you,i appreciate your time that you are checking my essays.
Kitos i have lots of shortages, so i made a decision to take an exam february 7 2010, i registered yesterday. By that date i must able to write an excellent essay in order to score 5.

please give me a piece of advice about doing the best. "if you wish to add this further burden to your workload, then that is your decision."- DO YOU mean i must try hard or wat? can you shed on light please .

Regards

[Nzuahp]