| #1 (permalink) Sun Nov 29, 2009 21:57 pm A company will build a large factory near your community...
|A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
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In the last century, there are a lot of factories have been built in the cities, they bring their good and bad effect to the community as we will see.
Building a factory near my community has some advantages. First of all, new job will be created so the rate of unemployment will decrease especially in the nearest places to the factory and that will increase the standard of living. The second reason, if the factory open , new shops ( like restaurants, coffee shop
) and schools will open to meet the increase demand for these services.
However, there are a lot of disadvantages of building factories inside the cities. First, many employees have their private cars so they will cause a lot of traffic and accident. Second, in most times the factories emission a lot of smoke so they will pollute the environment not just around the community but even the global environment.
There are two opposite sides for opening a new factory in any community, and I definitely oppose that ,because when we make any decision we must look to the good and bad consequence in long and short time, so the bad consequence of building a new factory in my community is larger than the good one.
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