Effects and solutions about street crime

[Junpi]

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Most street crimes are rarely committed by big criminal organizations but its effects have a strong influence in society.In this essay, I'll examine some causes and give solutions for this problem.

Unemployment is one of the main causes.Unemployment leads to crime such as pick-pocketing.Unemployed people have no jobs, no money while they still live with their own needs and responsibility for their family.Sometimes,they want to earn money in a short time and by any means so they do something wrong even crime.

In addition, lack of education also results in street crime.In poor families, children can't study or leave school before graduating because their parents don't have enough money to pay tuition.These children can grow up without full education.They can't find good jobs or they become unemployed.Besides,lack of education also leads to less understanding.People without a good attitude do anything they want.For example,in daily news,sometimes,train accidents happen;someone in the trains was injured because people who were outside threw stones at the windows for fun.Their act shows their superficial understanding.They didn't care what would happen to passenger in the train.They did what they liked.This also results from lack of good education.

We have looked at these causes.Now,I'll give some solutions to solve this problem.

Firstly,the government need to solve the unemployment problem.The government can expand economic programs such as : developing labor export.This help unemployed people have chance to change their lives.Reducing the population is also important.Because overpopulation is a burden in a country,it leads to unemployment,lack of education.

Secondly, the government should encourage education and give benefit to poor people.By education,people can be improved their understanding and their attitude become better.Especially,the government need to invest in the education fund.This will help poor students have the chance to study.They can find good jobs after graduating.

In conclusion,street crime is a social problem.It can be more worse and become a burden on society.It results from a lack of social care.With the right solutions,street crime can be reduced.

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[Junpi]

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[Junpi]

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[Kitosdad]

Please check this essay for me.Thank you so much :D :D

Most street crimes are rarely committed by big criminal organizations but its effects have a strong influence in society. In this essay, I'll examine some causes and give solutions TO this problem.

Unemployment is one of the main causes. Unemployment leads to crimeS such as pick-pocketing. Unemployed people have no jobs AND no money, while they still live with their own needs and responsibility for their family. Sometimesthey want to earn money in a short time and by any means, so they do something wrong, even crimINAL.

In addition, A lack of education also results in street crime. In SOME poor families children can't study or leave school before graduating, because their parents don't have enough money to pay FOR THEIR tuition.
These children can grow up without A full education.They can't find good jobs or they QUICKLY become unemployed.
Besides, A lack of education also leads to less understanding .People without a good attitude do anything they want. For example,in daily news,sometimes,train accidents happen;someone in the trains was injured because people who were outside threw stones at the windows for fun.
Their FOOLISH act shows their superficial understanding.They didn't care what would happen to passenger in the train.They did what they liked.This also results from A lack of good education.

We have looked at these causes.Now,I'll give some solutions to solve thESE problemS.

Firstly,the government need to solve the unemployment SITUATION.The government can expand economic programs such as : developing laboUr export.This helpS unemployed people TO have THE chance to change their lives.
Reducing the population is also important, because overpopulation is a burden in any country as it leads to unemployment AND A lack of education.

Secondly, the government should encourage education and give MORE benefitS to poorER people. By educatiNG people THEY can be improve their understanding and their attitude WOULD IMPROVE.
ESENTIALLY,the government need to invest in the education fund.This will help poor students have the chance to study. They can find good jobs after graduating.

In conclusion,street crime is a social problem.It can beCOME EVEN worse and become a burden on society.It results from a lack of social care. With the right solutions, I BELIEVE THAT street crime can be reduced.
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A very thoughtful essay Junpi. Well done.
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[Junpi]

You comeback!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It's great!!!!! Finally,you comeback ^^^^^^ :D :D :D
Thank you!I will try more.You know,my teaches said to me I was better than before :D :D Thank for your help :D :D Next week,I will have an exam,I will try try try :D

Can you rate my essay?? I think it's better when I know how I improve.:D I know I need try more :D

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Junpi. I wish you well in your exam. Just take care and remember well the basics that you now know.

Keep it simple .... you know the rest. :) :)

Kitos.
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[Junpi]

Thank you so much :D