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#2 (permalink) Mon Dec 07, 2009 18:37 pm Nowadays, communicating with others is faster and easier thanks to technology... |
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Good Evening! I can tell you some points and you can have an idea of more points. A Introduction:Technology has improven the way people live.We don't need to travel or send letters and wait for months for our reply.Through technology we can send message anywhere and whenever we want. B Body.Many years ago people use to communicate by sending letters or by traveling,which can be delivered maybe after few days,but technology can deliver out messages within seconds.Its an effective way to communicate fast and get answers at the same time.Its cheap.Sending letters is an expensive way to communicate.
I think your last statement is absolutely right.
I want to add more:Technology has change our way of living.We dont need to buy music,games or books and spend thousands of dollars but we can get them from the internet which is the priceless way of buying things..
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Luby I'm here quite often ;-)

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#3 (permalink) Mon Dec 07, 2009 23:26 pm Nowadays, communicating with others is faster and easier thanks to technology... |
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Hi Sung_Tung You should have written an essay so that we can pass comments. http://www.english-test.net/forum/ftopic47146.html Write spontaneously, you have not that much time on the test to... Your outlines was good. As you know you have to write; paragraph 1= introduction paragraph 2-3- and maybe 4 = supporting paragraph paragraph 5 = conclusions
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Hi Luby You are an old member, but it's the first time I see you on this forum, so let me say: Welcome to this forum! Please read this page: http://www.english-test.net/forum/ftopic48100.html#how_to_use_a_spell-checker Thank you Luby. Best of luck. _________________ Global Marketing |
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Richard I'm a Communicator ;-)

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