Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot

[Radhichaitu]

Many people strongly believe that large income equals success. According to me success is more than earning a lot of money. In my point of view only people who earn a lot of love and affection, respect, fame are the successful people. So I disagree with the statement that only people who earn a lot of money are successful
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First of all gaining love and affection is important to me. If we have lot of money but if we don’t have a person who cares and loves you means what you will do with that money. You can’t buy love and affections with money. Some people think that if we earn lot of money means we can do anything. Some time they will neglect their family members in busy of earning money. Some time they don’t have time to enjoy their personal life, and then what is the use of that money. Life is short we have a lot of relations you should respect them.
Next getting respect is significant. For example my neighbors are very rich, they are not attend any functions in colony. They can think that everything get by money. They won’t get respect from the colony. When you will respect others then others will respect you.
Teachers are earns low salaries but their name, fame and respect, we can’t describe in words. Job satisfaction is important than earning lot of money.

Most people assume that famous people are rich people. I don’t think that is true because I saw many people who are famous but not rich. For example Mother Theresa
Everybody know her well, she is a famous social worker. When she was come to India she has few rupees in her pocket, because her helping nature she got a name and fame. Mother Theresa was great humanitarian.

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[Radhichaitu]

Hello everyone
I wrote a an essay .
Positive and negative comments are appreciated.
Please let me know my mistakes.
Specially to my friend Kitosdad , please correct my essay.
In advance thanks to everyone , who will read my essay.

[Kitosdad]

Many people strongly believe that A large income equals success. According to me success is more than earning a lot of money. FROM my point of view only people who earn a lot of love and affection, respect AND fame are successful people, THEREFORE I disagree with the statement that only people who earn a lot of money are successful.

First of all, gaining love and affection is THE MOST important ACHIEVEMENT to me. If we have A lot of money but if we don’t have ANYONE who cares OR loves US THEN what VALUE IS THERE TO that money?
You can’t buy love and affection with money. Some people think that if we earn A lot of money IT means THAT we can do anything. (Sometime) they will neglect their family members in THEIR QUEST TO earn money. Sometime they don’t EVEN have time to enjoy their personal life, and then what is the use of that money?
Life is short ,AND IF we have a lot of RELATIVES WE should respect them.

Next, EARNING respect is VERY NECESSARY IN ONE'S LIFE. For example my neighboUrs are very rich, they HAVE not attendED any functions in OUR COMMUNITY. They think that THEY CAN GET everything SIMPLY BY HAVING money. They won’t get respect from the COMMUNITY. When you SHOW respect TO others then others will respect you.
Teachers HERE EARN VERY low salaries but their nameS and THE respect THAT GOES WITH THEIR NAMES CANNOT BE DESCRIBED SIMPLY WITH WORDS.
Job satisfaction is FAR MORE important than earning lotS of money.

Most people assume that famous people are rich people. I don’t think that is true because I HAVE SEEN many people who are famous but not rich. For example Mother Theresa; everybody knowS her well, she is a famous social worker.
When she FIRST CAME to India she HAD BUT A few rupees in her pocket, BUT because OF her helping nature she BECAME FAMOUS THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE WORLD.

Mother Theresa was A great humanitarian.
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[Radhichaitu]

Hi my dear friend Kitosdad,
Thank you very much for your correction.
I worried, that will you correct it or not.
I am so..........happy.