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win the love #1 (permalink) Fri Dec 11, 2009 19:27 pm   win the love		  
Hi everybody,
1. Make your nature sweet & lovable, then win the love of all.
2. Make your nature sweet & lovable, thereby win the love of all.
Which of the two is more natural and grammatically OK?
Please correct it, if the sentence can be made more emphatic.
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win the love #2 (permalink) Fri Dec 11, 2009 20:50 pm   win the love		  
1. Make your nature sweet & lovable, then you will surely win the love of all.
2. Make your nature sweet & lovable, for in doing so you will win the love of all.


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