Some people prefer to finish a project completely before starting another.

[Manbahs1]

Some people prefer to finish a project completely before starting another. Others prefer to do two or several projects at the same time. Which way would you prefer?

From a social point of view, project management has always been a controversial issue. According to a survey conducted by “Society Reviews” journal, hasty people have 50% more mistakes in project in comparison with people taking time in their job. I firmly believe that living on the fast lane is quite distressful.

I am of the belief that we will have a better life with haste out of the picture. People trying to do two or more projects coincidentally are under quite a lot of pressure. In other words, they should take serious measures as far as accomplishing the projects in the certain amount of time is concerned. Therefore life will present them with a great deal of stress. To illustrate my point I need to remind you of heart attack which is a prevailing disease today.

I do not hesitate to say that it is more likely to make mistake when several projects are conducted parallel, due to the fact that it is impossible for an individual to concentrate on a variety of subjects. Needless to say that, not only these kinds of people are not productive what so ever but also they will lose their confidence after some time. Not to mention that a considerable amount of time is required in order to correct these mistakes.

It is unjustifiable to say that just because we are living in the world in which time is invaluable we should devote as less of time as we can to a project. The chief reason is that we should evolve the world and this goal will not be achieved by devoting little time to the jobs.

Having considered the matter from different aspects, one is left with no other choice but to think that the accuracy of the result is quite as important as the time. Therefore people should take the exactness of their result into consideration however the level of efficiency will undoubtedly degrade.
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I'd be more than glad if you could please evaluate my essay.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Anthropology

[Kitosdad]

From a social point of view, project management has always been a controversial issue. According to a survey conducted by “Society Reviews” journal, hasty people have A 50% GREATER POSSIBILITY OF MAKING SERIOUS ERRORS IN A project in comparison with people taking time in their job. I firmly believe that living IN the fast lane is quite stressful.

I am of the belief that we will have a better life with haste out of the picture.
People trying to do two or more projects coincidentally are under quite a lot of pressure. In other words, they should take serious measures as far as accomplishing the projects in the ALLOTTED TIME, therefore life will present them with a great deal of stress.
To illustrate my point I need to remind you of heart attackS, which ARE a prevailing disease THESE DAYS. (ANYTHING ELSE?)

I do not hesitate to say that it is more likely THAT MISTAKES WILL OCCUR when several projects are conducted IN parallel, due to the fact that it is impossible for an individual to concentrate on a variety of subjects.
Needless to say, not only ARE these kinds of people UNproductive, but THAT they will ALSO PROBABLY lose their confidence after some time, not to mention that a considerable amount of time WILL BE required in order to correct THEIR mistakes.

It is unjustifiable to say that just because we are living in A world in which time is invaluable, THAT we should devote as LITTLE time as we can to a project.
The chief reason is that we should evolve the world, and this goal will not be achieved by devoting little time to jobs.

Having considered THIS matter from different aspects, one is left with no other choice THAN to think that the accuracy of the result is quite as important as the time SPENT IN ACHIEVING IT. Therefore people should take the exactness of their result into consideration.
However, the level of efficiency will undoubtedly degrade.
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A difficult topic, well argued.

Kitos.
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[Manbahs1]

thank you very much indeed for putting your time in correcting my essay.