Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way...

[Radhichaitu]

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to improve the way people live? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Food is the fundamental part of life. We can not survive with out food. Nowadays preparation of food is very easy compare to olden days. Present time people also very busy with their work; some time they will not find time to prepare food. The development of technology open many new ways to food preparation and preservation; those are refrigerators, microwaves, modern stoves and rice cooker. So this ultimately improved the people lives.

Refrigerators are keeps the food fresh. So many new features are developed in refrigerators like auto cooling system, large storage capacity and auto lock etc.
Some people can not find time to prepare food daily so they prepares variety of food when they will free; and they will stores in refrigerators .It keeps the food fresh and healthy. Refrigerators are helpful to store not only food but also vegetables, pickles and meat etc.

Microwaves are very useful to prepare the different kinds food with in minutes. It saves the cooking time and makes the tasty and healthy food. Rice cookers are cooks the rice with in minutes. Automatic cooking is very useful. Modern stoves with Germany technology are very helpful to cook food. In this way we can prepare the food with less time. Food preservation techniques also improved so we can enjoy variety of food for longer time.

People finding time to enjoy their personal life with variety of good, tasty and healthier food. Easier ways of preparing food made peoples live more easy and comfortable.

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Social History (2)

[Radhichaitu]

Hello everyone
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[New_Moon]

Hi, Radhichaitu

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[Radhichaitu]

Sure Yui.

[Kitosdad]

Food is the fundamental part of OUR LIVES. We cannot survive (without) food. Nowadays preparation of food is very easy compareD to olden days.
MODERN people ARE so very busy with their work THAT sometimeS they CANnot find time to prepare food FOR THEMSELVES.
The development of technology INTRODUCED many new METHODS IN food preparation and preservation; those are refrigerators, microwaves, modern stoves and THE MODERN rice cooker. So this HAS ultimately improved people lives.

Refrigerators keep food fresh. So many new features are INCORPORATED inTO refrigerators, like THE auto cooling system, large storage capacity and auto lock etc.
Some people (cannot) find THE time to prepare food daily, so they prepare A variety of food FOR when they HAVE THE TIME TO COOK FOR THEMSELVES . They store THEIR PURCHASES in THE refrigeratoR .It keeps the food fresh and UNTAINTED.
Refrigerators are helpful. THEY store not only food but also vegetables, pickles and meat etc.

Microwaves are very useful IN COOKING different kinds food IN minutes. THEY save cooking time and make HOT, tasty and healthy food.
Rice cookers cook rice in minutes. In this way we can prepare food IN less time.
Automatic cooking is very useful. Modern stoves with German technology are very helpful WHEN cookING food.

Food preservation techniques HAVE also improved so NOW we can enjoy A GREATER variety of food for longer PERIODS.

People NOWADAYS ARE finding time to enjoy their personal life with A variety of good, tasty and healthier food. Easier ways of preparing food HAVE CERTAINLY made peoples' lives EASIER and MORE comfortable.
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[Radhichaitu]

Hello Kitosdad
Surely I will follow your suggestions.
Thanks a lot for spending your valuable time.