Some people think that teachers and education professionals should make all of th

[Kleopatra]

Some people think that teachers and education professionals should make all of the important decisions about what subjects are taught in schools. Others think that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Business and industry are the integral part of any country. So I support the idea that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions in schools rather than teachers and education professionals. In this case students are able to learn more practical experiences rather than theories. They can also learn the most important subjects by today’s standards. Additionally, being achieved success in job easily is only possible when business and industry professionals make major decisions in schools.

First of all, practice is very crucial rather than theory in present-day world. So, decisions by the business and industry professionals can help students to improve their practical sides, because theory which is prevailed in teachers and education professionals’ decisions is not difficult to be learnt. Even, students can learn book materials at home by themselves. As a matter of fact, we observe that in private universities decisions are made by the business and industry professionals in our country, so, that is why their students are more skillful and are more developed in practical fields.

Business and industry professionals are the people who often visit to foreign countries due to their job. It allows them to be aware of the most developed fields in oversees countries. At this point only they can direct students which subjects or majors are the most important to attain nowadays. In our university students were tend to take language courses by last year. However, by the decisions of business professionals this year students began to take more economic courses due to our state’s economic situation.

Finally, students can succeed more at work if their subjects were made by business and industry professionals when they were students, because it helps them to be well aware of their job. So they are able to implement their tasks fast and successfully.

Consequently, decisions by business and industry professionals give us more advantages rather than decisions by teachers and education professionals. By learning from them we can be more practiced students, can take up-to-date subjects that are more important to us. What is more, students can get more credit at work if their subject decisions were made by business and industry professionals.

please KITOS EVALUATE IT , but i have a problem with time, i can only write essay up to 50 minutes not 30 mins :( when i write 30 mins it s so confusing. PLZZZZ GIVE A PIECE OF ADVICE ME.

THANKSSSSSS A LOT IN ADVANCE

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Art History

[Kitosdad]

Kleo, you wrote more than four hundred words. Look at the written text and decide what you could afford to leave out without spoiling the essay.

Kitos.
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[Kleopatra]

Some people think that teachers and education professionals should make all of the important decisions about what subjects are taught in schools. Others think that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions. Which view do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion

Business and industry are the integral part of any country. So I support the idea that business and industry professionals should make all of the major decisions in schools. In this case students are able to learn more practical experiences and subjects by today’s standards rather than theories. Additionally, being achieved success in job easily is only possible when business and industry professionals make major decisions in schools.

First of all, practice is very crucial rather than theory in present-day world. So, decisions by the business and industry professionals can help students to improve their practical sides, because theory which is prevailed in teachers and education professionals’ decisions is not difficult to be learnt. Even, students can learn book materials at home by themselves. As a matter of fact, decisions are made by the business and industry professionals in some universities of our country, so, that is why their students are more skillful and are more developed in practical fields.

Second advantage is that in my opinion only business and industry professionals can direct students which subjects or majors are the most important ones to attain nowadays. So, they are the people who often visit to foreign countries due to their job. It allows them to be aware of the most developed fields in oversees countries and to practice them in their country. In our university students were tend to take language courses by last year. However, by the decisions of business professionals this year students began to take more economic courses due to our state’s economic situation.

Finally, students can succeed more at work if their subjects were made by business and industry professionals when they were students, because it helps them to be well aware of their job. So they are able to implement their tasks fast and successfully.

Consequently, decisions by business and industry professionals give us more advantages rather than decisions by teachers and education professionals. By learning from them we can be more practiced students, can take up-to-date subjects that are more important to us. What is more, students can get more credit at work if their subject decisions were made by business and industry professionals.

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[Kitosdad]

That's a lot better Kleo. More precise and to the point. Keep this standard up and you won't go far wrong.
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