TOEFL® essay: Do you like to eat at home or eat out?

[Romyakidraghu]

Dear alan,

please check my toefl essay

Do you like to eat at home or eat out?

In this busy work schedule people often tend to eat out. Moreover it has become trend to eat out to show off their wealth. But I prefer to cook and eat food at home. The following are the reason to bolster my preference.

Cooking is my passion. After hectic work, it always nice to be your own boss in kitchen. Being a connoisseur, I prefer to try out varieties of food. I can do whatever I wish to, without the requirement of getting permission from anyone. To serve such different dishes to my family members and getting lauds from them make me feel happier.

I would see eating at home is one way to spend some valuable time with my family. For example having my supper with my family gives time to share their experience either in their work place or in school. It gives me immense pleasure and complacency.

Cooking is not as hassle as it was in the past. With microwave and other kitchen accessories cooking now become very easy.

Though eating out has become fashion now days, we do not know how hygiene the food will be. We are not sure of how properly the dishes will be cleaned. If food is eaten at home you are sure that it is cleaned properly because hygiene is an important thing.

One more important aspect is money. It is cheap when you eat at home. One can not afford to spend so much money everyday.

It is good and fun to have food outside once in a while but not everyday. So for these reasons I think it is better to eat food at home rather than out.

From
ramya

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[Richard]

Hi Romyakidraghu
Sorry I'm not Alan, Ignore my comment If you feel the need to.
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