Please amend (data base error)

[Torsten]

A database error occurred while activating your account -

Original German text:
Datenbankfehler bei der Freischaltung -

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[Alan]

Hi Torsten,

I could nitpick here and say that the subject of 'activating' isn't 'error' and so to please Dr Grammar, I would suggest 'during the activation of your account' or 'while we were activating...'

Alan
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