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use land effectively #1 (permalink) Sun Feb 07, 2010 11:09 am   use land effectively
 

095. Imagine that you have received some land to use as you wish. How would you use this land?


In my country, the number of poor people is very high and many of them are homeless. Suppose I have some land to do what I want, I think building a big house for poor people is my first choice. The house not only provides these people a shelter but also results in many advantages.

Vietnam is a poor country where there are still many people jobless and homeless. Even in Hanoi, the capital of Vietnam, sometimes, I see people have to sleep on the couch in the park or even on the ground of the street. They are too poor to buy themselves a place to live; they die from disease and coldness. Besides very few homeless people who behave themselves, try to make and meet, most of these people manage to survive by becoming badgers or robbers or committing social evil. The latter make the city like a mess. However, I think all of them are good but nobody helps them, making them feel alone and have seemingly no way to survive.

Building a big house for poor people is an outstanding way of helping not only these people but also the society. Although the house could not help perfect conditions, it helps these people avoid being cold, getting disease. The most important is that the house makes the homeless people know that other people, who are lucky to have a good life, care about them, are trying to help them. That is a kind of encouragement, which would make the people feel responsible for behaving themselves, try to work, promoting the society. The number of social evils must be decreased; the city must be more “beautiful”. Moreover, may be the house also result in an extra advantage, which is teaching people especially children about caring and help.

The house, if it is built, is like a big magic to the home less people. It encourages them to live, to work, and to behave in good manner and teaches other about caring and help.

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