Could someone review my statement of purpose?

[Eabhi200k]

STATEMENT OF PURPOSE

My fascination for Computers and its application began to be realized way back in 2002 as a student of “BASIC” where I created my first working calculator successfully I then decided to pursue a career in this field. This decision was supported by my skills at programming. It was a sense of achievement that further reinforced my ambition. My urge for knowledge and an open mind for technology would be best exploited in the field of “Computer Science”. I was given training in the basics of the operation and the applications of the computers during my school days. From that day onwards until the 10th standard I was constantly being taught different concepts of computer in different levels. The various concepts that I am thorough with, in school, are Word, BASIC and C Fundamentals. Computer has always been my favorite subject and I was able to secure my name most of the time in the toppers list of class.

I have completed my 10+2 with science and mathematics trade in which I have done well and achieved 70% marks in the board examination. Immediately after my 10+2 examination I was forced to join my father’s construction business as at that time my father’s health condition was not very well and he ask me to lead in. I continued with that for 2 years and in between I also joined a C language classes and other short term courses for JAVA and HTML in my hometown Gorakhpur.

After spending 2 years in my father’s business I got a chance to join a newly formed software development company “Consummate Technologies Private Limited” in which I worked as Jr. PHP developer where I got opportunity to work on a part of a big project for a website’s renovation which was my first experience to work as a professional developer and I continued to work in that company for next 6 months and grab some experience and after sometime it influenced me so much that I decided to start my own ISP and web development company “ABC” www.abc.com, as a starting I decided to resell the products of other U.S. based ISP Company ABC, Inc and after working hard day and night I was there with more than 1000 clients from US, UK and India itself and more than 1500 of there website hosted with my firm and then I decide collocate my own servers in a US datacenter and shift all my customer from BurstNET to my own server. In between I have also completed some of my own projects:

1) Automated Billing System.
2) PHPTRedirector: for handling a website’s traffic.
3) PHPWHMReseller: Fully Automated Solution for Web Hosting Resellers with integrated Automated Billing System.
4) Started a new sister company abc for providing the web domain name solution and developed the fully integrated web applications for registering the domains on real time basis.
5) PHPDDOSPro: Protection against DDOS (Distributed Denial Of Service) attacks by real time traffic monitoring for the PHP supported Web servers.

My ultimate goal in my career is to make a commendable contribution to the computing world either by starting an innovative venture or doing research which would change the dimensions of future computing and the way we perceive the computers. Now I have determined that a dedicated study on Computer Science will enable me to aggregate all my previous knowledge & experience on the field and encourage in achieving my career goal. I am confident that my academic records and practical knowledge combined with my eagerness to do research exhibit the perseverance and zeal required to pursue a Graduate's Degree in Waterloo University.

After obtaining my B.C.S degree in Computer Science, I plan to pursue Master studies. This B.C.S Degree will make me more knowledgeable & technically advanced than my current peers. It would make me better suited to go in for research. Moreover, the technical challenges encountered in the graduate program will provide motivation and opportunity for methodological innovation.
My coursework along with my extensive Computer background will allow me to function well within the graduate program. I believe that a graduate study will provide milestone in my career along with invaluable experiences and skills that will allow me to become a successful, innovative professional and gives assistance to accomplish my goals.