 #2 (permalink) Fri Feb 26, 2010 0:06 am I am Indu, new to this blog... |
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Could u help me in correcting this essay ?
Question :
· You have penfriend living in another country and he is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.
Ø Write a letter to your penfriend . In your letter
Ø Greet your friend and say why you are writing
Ø Briefly describe a news story in your country
Ø Explain why people are interested in it.
Answer
Dear Divin,
Hai Divin , how are you ? I am doing well in here. I hope your work is going well. I got your letter last week. I am very happy to heard about you and your country. In your letter mentioned you are very curious to learn about the major news items in our country. That is why I writing this letter to you.
The major news item in our country is accidents. Lot of accidents is occurred in this short period. Accidents are happening because of the careless driving, over speed and bad road facility.
Some people are doesn’t bother about others and other vehicle. Careless driving and overtaking are the major fact to occurring accidents. At the time of driving lot of people are try to use phone and smoking. It is lose our concentration and it become to accident.
Over speed is also a one of the cause to occur accident. Bad road facility , some were we can see the roads are damaged because of the rain and improper repairing . At the time of rainy season we can see lot of ponds are formed on the roads, because of it we can’t see the holes on the road . It is also the one of the cause to occur accident.
The above mentioned problems are the major cause to occur accident. The people are very interested in such type of activities like over speed, over taking and using mobile phones and smoking during driving. Because, I think they are not bother bout others and him self.
Yours loving friend,
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 Indumohan81
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