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Misunderstanding and mistrust bedevil contracts | a part of a poem
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Checking stylistic errors. #1 (permalink) Tue Mar 02, 2010 22:45 pm   Checking stylistic errors.
 

Dear friends, I would like to ask you to read my translation and find errors in it if any. I am not sure if there are stylistic errors. Please, help me to perfect my translation. Thank you in advance. Vic
My translation:
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The special position of Uzbekistan on the integration on the territory of the former Soviet Union.

The problem of water supply is relevant to Uzbekistan, where the annual water demand is about 55 billion cubic meters.

There will hardly be aggravation of relations among Central Asian countries on the basis of the "water problem", however, to settle this problem the countries should consider this question together.
Water resources originated on the territory of contemporary Tajikistan and Kyrgyzstan are used by all the countries of the Central Asian region.
The shortage of water resources is the main problem and the issue of security of the entire region.
Construction of new hydropower facilities in the upper reaches of the Amu Darya and Syr Darya rivers should take into account the irrigation regime and environmental safety.
All the problems relating to the provision of water and energy balance in Central Asia should be settled on the basis of mutual understanding, bilateral dialogue and consensus among the countries of the region.
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