TOEFL® essay - Dancing plays an important role in a culture...

[Wendeus]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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The dance (Dancing), it is one of the most important cultural expressions that humans has. Dancing plays a really important role in a country's culture. Because, it is a demonstration of that culture richness that every country has. Besides, it is a very interesting way to express our feelings and as a cultural event it is a wonderful manner in which we decreasing our levels of stress. Let me illustrate you how dancing works in us.

Every country on the world has its own typical cultural expressions and commonly they are really proud of this. For that reason dancing is one of these expression which helps to express the cultural richness of that country. There are lots of examples but one of them is the country music in the United States. This is a typical expression of its culture. They use very nice customs and they show us the cultural richness in every country dance presentation.

On the other hand, when we are dancing, we are expressing our feeling through our movements. For instance, I remember a very famous movie of 70's with John Travolta called "Grease". That movie was awesome, and it was incredible how the actors could express very well their different feeling dancing in the scenes of the movie. They represented love, angry and happiness, just dancing.

Finally, more and more people a becoming very stressful by different problems. Dancing as a cultural event it could be a wonderful manner to decrease those levels of stress. A case in point is, in the nearby of my neighborhood a group of theatrical actors are presenting a dance performance using jazz and blues as their music inspiration to do this performance. I went the last week just after to have a fight with my girlfriend. I saw the performance; I really decrease my level of stress for the fight. I called without stress to my girlfriend. We holded a very pacific discussion and we fix our disagreements. Tell me if that was not a pretty good therapy to leave off the stress.

In conclusion, I agree with the statement "Dancing plays an important role in a culture." Because, it help us to show the cultural richness of a country. Also, dancing help us expressing our feelings and lastly, when we go to a dancing cultural event, we are going actually to an anti-stress therapy. I wish we could have more of this kind of events. I am very stressed lately.

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[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Dancing plays an important role in a culture. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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The dance (Dancing), it is one of the most important cultural expressions that humans hasPERFORM . Dancing plays a really important role in a country's culture. Because, it is a demonstration of that cultureS richness, ONE that every country has. Besides, it is a very interesting way to express our feelings and as a cultural event it is a wonderful manner in which we CAN decreasing DECREASE our levels of stress. Let me illustrate TO you how dancing works.

Every country on IN the world has its own typical cultural expressions and commonly they are really proud of this THESE. For that reason dancing is one of thOse expression which helps to express the cultural richness of that country. There are lots of examples but one of them is countr y AND WESTERN music in the United States. This is a typical expression of its culture. They use very nice customs and they show us the cultural richness in every countrIES dance presentation.

On the other hand, when we are dancing, we are expressing our feelingS through our movements. For instance, I remember a very famous movie of 70's with John Travolta called "Grease". That movie was awesome, and it was incredible how the actors could express very well their different feeling SIMPLY BY dancing in the scenes of the movie. They represented love, angER and happiness, just dancing.

Finally, more and more people aRE becoming very stressful BECAUSE OF different problems. Dancing as a cultural event it could be a wonderful manner IN WHICH to decrease those levels of stress. A case in point is, in MY the nearby of my neighboUrhood a group of theatrical actors are presenting a dance performance using jazz and blues as their musicAL inspiration to do this performance.
I went theRE last week just after to have HAVING HAD a fight with my girlfriend. I saw the performance; I really decreaseD my level of stress for the fight. I called without stress to my girlfriend. We holded HELD a very pacific SPECIFIC discussion and we fixED our disagreements. Tell me if that was not a pretty good therapy to leave WARD off the stress.

In conclusion, I agree with the statement "Dancing plays an important role in a culture." Because, it help us to show the cultural richness of a country. Also, dancing help us IN expressing our feelings and lastly, when we go to a dancing cultural event, we are going actually to an anti-stress therapy. I wish we could have more of this kind of event. I am very stressed lately.
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Kitos. Keep writing and reading Wendeus. You still have a way to go yet my friend.
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[Kelvin6404]

I really agree with your idea.
I first thought there are no relationship with dance and culture,
but I should also think more deeply.

Good luck! I enjoyed Your essay! ^0^
Kelvin