Can any one rate my essay?

[Krrish1192]

Teachers should encourage their students to question everything.
Do you agree or disagree?

Every question has two sides, yes or no. As per human mind, they have lots of question and they like to know their answers. I believe that teacher is that person who has great knowledge. This is very important issue because schools are creating persons who are responsible for future invention. So, I totally agree with author point that Teachers should encourage their students to question everything.
Now a day education becomes a priority for all people. Without education person fill alone in world. Education helps to gain knowledge. In my opinion if we like to gain some knowledge we put question in front of our teachers but it is only possible is teachers encourage us to do so. In the case of education and science, many things people think are true or not. An example- for many years’ people thought that the earth was flat and many believe that earth is round. But of course it turn out that the earth is looks like the orange. If scientists did not question what everyone thought was true, may be this discovery not happened. Since many things are wrong, teachers should help students to question for that.
If you believe everything, it may be dangerous for students because sometimes when they found that their belief is totally wrong, may they frustrate. If you believe everything then you might end up thinking and doing things what you do on your own. So, teachers should encourage students to ask question what they studied in class. When I was in class, my teacher writes a sum and told that there is only one formula for that and you must find out. However He done this purposely because he likes to encourage asking questions why there is only one formula? Thus, it is clear that a teacher should show the student how to question what is being taught in class.
When students leave the school, they do not have teacher to guide them. A students needs to know how to judge a thing when they find it. And also, whether they believe in these things or not? So it is necessary for them to question things. I believe that questioning is always better than just believing things.
In conclusion, I have shown that it is better for teachers to encourage their students to question things. Without curiosity there is no education. Also students do not have good knowledge for future and judge what is best for them and how can they rate them? They believe or not in some idea. This all possible when we have answers of our questions.

What is the score for this essay out of 10?

TOEFL listening lectures: What aspect of USA Today does the professor mainly discuss?

[Kitosdad]

Not a bad essay Krrish. You have sufficient intelligence to imagine different topics, but you are still lacking in the skills to write them in a clearly understandable manner.
Your vocabulary is fine and you have the basic skills in writing, but you still lack skill in sentence structuring. Your essay is difficult to understand because the reader has to keep asking,"What does he mean by that?"
You need to read more. Not just read, but to pay particular notice to the form of the text used in structuring each sentence.

You are still in the 6/10 area.

Kitos.
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[Pasban110]

Hi Kitos,
as you told me before, I had and have the some problem. By now, I'm studying grammar topics such as: parts of a sentence, types of sentence structures, and so forth. Do you have any idea about these parts of English grammar? Also, How do I know that the sentence is grammatically correct or not?

Thanks in advance.

-Salivan

[Krrish1192]

HI kitos
I will surely and hardly work on your comment.
Thank you very much for your time to check essay.
I need one answer If I post speaking task here can you rate it?
Thanks,
Krrish

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Krrish. Of course you can, and of course I will, but in doing this you may begin to neglect your spelling.
I personally don't think it is a good idea, but if you want to try it, by all means go ahead.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Salivan. Do not concern yourself at the moment by attempting to write impressive essays.
Concentrate on writing simple clearly understandable text. As you begin to master this
you will develop an inner need to use a more impressive vocabulary ... but not yet!
You have demonstrated an active imagination. Give your imagination an opportunity to run wild, and stop bogging your mind down with unnecessary complex grammar.
Write simple, interesting and entertaining text. Your natural ability will shine through in your work.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Pasban110]

Hi.
Wow! You impressed me again! I definitely will follow your leads.

Thank you for your guides and efforts indeed.

-Salivan