Essay: Which would you prefer- Study at home or traditional schools.

[Goodman]

In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
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Computers have re-defined learning process. Given a choice I would surely prefer learning from home.

Study at home makes me feel very comfortable and nice. I am really accustomed to my study table in my room. So in a way that would be the best place I can study, learn as well as concentrate.

I think attending lectures at one place reduces time and effort. During my under-grad days I used to spend more than an hour traveling to my college. It used to be so exhaustive. At the end of the day driving back home was equally tiring and time consuming. I used to really wish I could attend my classes sitting at home on my computer or television. Having faced this situation,I think choice of studying at home suits me well.

Video Conferencing is a widely used tool now a days. Institutes and offices use them on a regular basis. They do it to save time, money as well as to reach the maximum number of people.
So one of my most important reason for supporting this manner of education is that it will increase number of student accommodation. Due to class capacity restrains, students are often rejected. That is really bad when you are not able to learn a particular course just because of lack of resources.
So this technique will also help to increase student participation.

Studying in your own space also helps to concentrate more. You are away from other distractions that might occur in a class. To conclude,I think studying at your home gives you ample amount of liberty and motivation to focus upon learning. So I would prefer to take my lessons from home using computer or television.
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Please review and grade my essay.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a social science class

[Kitosdad]

In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools. Which would you prefer? Use reasons and specific details to explain your choice.
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Computers have re-defined learning process. Given a choice I would surely prefer learning from home.

Study at home makes me feel very comfortable and nice. I am really accustomed to my study table in my room. So in a way that would be the best place I can study, learn as well as concentrate.

I think attending lectures at one place reduces time and effort. During my under-grad days I used to spend more than an hour traveling to my college. It used to be so exhaustive. At the end of the day driving back home was equally tiring and time consuming. I used to really wish I could attend my classes sitting at home on my computer or television. Having faced this situation,I think choice of studying at home suits me well.

Video Conferencing is a widely used tool now a days. Institutes and offices use them on a regular basis. They do it to save time, money as well as to reach the maximum number of people.
So one of my most important reason for supporting this manner of education is that it will increase number of student accommodation. Due to class capacity restrains, students are often rejected. That is really bad when you are not able to learn a particular course just because of lack of resources.
So this technique will also help to increase student participation.

Studying in your own space also helps to concentrate more. You are away from other distractions that might occur in a class. To conclude,I think studying at your home gives you ample amount of liberty and motivation to focus upon learning. So I would prefer to take my lessons from home using computer or television.
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Good morning Demon. Quite a good essay, but nowhere near long enough.You appear to have paid scant attention to reviewing your composition for there are glaring omissions in your text. Nevertheless, it was readable.

Kitos. 7/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Goodman]

Thank You Kitos!
I will surely try to improve.