what is it mean?

[Krrish1192]

This is one essay topic I found in book

There is nothing that an uneducated person can teach an educated person.
Do you agree or disagree?

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture on agriculture

[Kitosdad]

The answer of this question is YOUR opinion. Just answer it as best you can,

Kitos.
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[Pasban110]

Hello,
I think this is an interesting topic. So, here is my essay:

Universities teach people to know about new sciences. Those places help people to learn knowledge by the help of professors who are masters in their subjects. SO, the learner can learn many things in an specific topic just by going to one of those universities. But, life is not just courses. There are many things that needs experience, which can attain with relationship and making contact with other people. Educated persons might deal with other educators in their universities. So, when they graduate, they will have contact with persons how even can not read a name. Farmers, old grandmothers and grandfathers are best examples.
My mother is not educated, but most of the times she was helping me to deal with my own problems. I also have learned many things from my father who is not educated too. We learn things from them so-called experience. They have gained it during their life time. Experience is not something that could be learned by just reading books and articles. So, we sometimes need to talk them, and request their help. So, if they have no education, then why we ask them to help us to solve our problems?
Another example is the property of some herbs. Some pharmacist may not know the cure of some herbs. They may just know how a special medicine works, but when they analyze those herbs, they find out that they must know something else from those people who were using those herbs.
Whit those two examples, I think there are other examples that prove there are many things we need to know from other people, those who may know nothing about science and educational materials.

Dear Kitos, how are you? I hope you do well. Would you mind to evaluate and score the above essay? I was working on how to moderate my ideas. It of course takes me too time to find some key points. But I know that I someday will write some professional essays.

Thank you in advance.

-Salivan

[Kitosdad]

Hello,
I think this is an interesting topic. So, here is my essay:

Universities teach people to know about new sciences. Those places help people to learn knowledge by WITH the help of professors who are masters in their subjects. SO, the learner can learn many things in an A specific topic just by going to one of those universities.
But, life is not /just/ONLY ABOUT/ courses. There are many things that CALL FOR experience, which ONE can attain with FRESH relationshipS and making contact with other people.
AN educated persons might deal with other educators in their universities.
So, when they graduate, they will have contact with persons how even UNEDUCATED PEOPLE WHO (cannot) EVEN read aNOTHER PERSONS name.
Farmers, old grandmothers and grandfathers are /best/PRIME/ examples.

My mother is not educated, but most of the time she /was helping/HELPS/ me to deal with my own problems. I have ALSO learned many things from my father who is not A WELL educated MAN .
We learn things from them THEIR so-called experience. They have gained it during their life-timeS.
Experience is not something that could be learned by just reading books and articles. So, we sometimes need to talk WITH them, and request their help.
So, if they have RECEIVED no education, then why SHOULD /we ask them/WE EXPECT THEM TO BE ABLE/ to help us to solve our problems?

Another example is REGARDING the propertIES of some herbs. Some pharmacistS may not know the curATIVE PROPERTIES of some herbs. They may just know how a special medicine works, but when they analyze those herbs, they find out that they must /know/LEARN/ something else from those UNEDUCATED people.
THESE PEOPLE who were using those herbs FOR MANY YEARS BEFORE THE CHEMISTS DISCOVERED THEIR PROPERTIES.

THESE two examples ILLUSTRATE THAT I think there are other examples that prove there are many things we /need to know/CAN LEARN/ from other people, EVEN those who may know nothing about science and educational materials, YET ARE ABLE TO PROVIDE CURES FOR MANY ILLNESSES.
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You have written a very good essay here Pasban. You are progressing well. It shows that you are thinking deeply about the content, and that you require only a little more time before you succeed in expressing your thoughts in an intelligent and interesting manner
Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Pasban110]

Thank yooooooooooooou, Kitos!

I am very glad to hear that.

You know, I am working hard these days. I also read all your previous notes on other forums to discover my weakness. This is amazing. You guided them very well. Every time I read your guides, I feel enthusiastic to read more and work hard. Your helps are invaluable gifts to us.

Thank you again.

-Salivan