TOEFL® Essay:City or Country?

[Paranoid]

City or Country?
-------Some people enjoy with the life conditions and facilities of a countryside, meanwhile other prefer to live in a big city and get a great entertainment from it. Depending on my personal experience, personality and emotional concern, I prefer living in a big city to a country. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

-------The main reason for my propensity for living in a big city is that, living in a metropolis provides huge entertainment and advantages for its citizens. Population density in the city is very high, therefore there are always plenty of social activities such as concerts by the popular music band, sport events and so on. In addition, the residents of the city can enjoy with the facilities of the recreational centers. For instance, our classmates use the central opera house in order come together. Also, there are many big restaurants, entertainment centers which people visit in their free times. Considering all these facts mentioned above living in the cities comes more advantages than living in the county.

------ There is another factor that deserves some words here. Almost all famous and prestigious universities are located in the big cities. There are different nations from different backgrounds in the cities and it means having more access to various people involved in multiple attractive cultures. Moreover, technological advancements in the cities provide great facilities for the residents. Speedy and great access to the internet allows people to be involved with the latest news, technology and become more intellectual. Therefore, the cities overweight the towns.

-------To sum up, all the factors mentioned above prove that living in the city much more beneficial than living in the country.

TOEFL listening lectures: Which of the following is true of biological indicators?

[Paranoid]

Please Kitos, evaluate it..

[Kitosdad]

City or Country?
-------Some people enjoy the life conditions and facilities of THE countryside, meanwhile otherS prefer to live in a big city and get great entertainment from it. Depending on my personal experience, personality and emotional concern, I prefer living in a big city to IN THE country. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.

-------The main reason for my propensity for living in a big city is that, living in a metropolis provides huge entertainment and advantages for its citizens. Population density in the city is very high, therefore there are always plenty of social activities such as concerts by the popular music bandS, sportS events and so on.
In addition, the residents of the city can enjoy the facilities of the recreational centers. For instance, our classmates use the central opera house in order TO come together. Also, there are many big restaurants, entertainment centers which people visit in their free time. Considering all these facts mentioned above living in the cities BRINGS more advantages than living in the county.

------ There is another factor that deserves MENTIONING here. Almost all famous and prestigious universities are located in the big cities. There are different nationALITIES from different backgrounds in the cities and it means having more access to various people involved in multiple attractive cultures.
Moreover, technological advancements in the cities provide greatER facilities for the residents. Speedy and great access to the Internet allows people to be UP-TO-DATE with the latest news, technology and become more intellectual. Therefore, the cities OUTWEIGH the towns.

-------To sum up, all the factors mentioned above prove that living in the city much more beneficial than living in the country.
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Not bad, but your made little mention of the countryside, in fact you gave no comparison at all. You concentrated only on the city, when I hoped you would draw comparisons between them. Are there no advantages in living in the country?

Kitos 7/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Paranoid]

ok.I'll do it next time.