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[Krrish1192]

Nowadays food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

The twentieth century brings too many inventions in our life. They are not only associated with science but also associated with arts, crafts and many more. Nowadays we can prepare meals much faster that we could in the past. I agree with author that nowadays food has become easier to prepare and also this change improved the way people live. The main reason is nowadays it take less time than in the past, the availability of different types of utensils and of course, scientific method for preservation.

In modern century, women have equal opportunity to work. They do not have much time for cooking. Nowadays, you can find chopped vegetables, prepared snacks, can soup and many more. By this way, to prepare food is taking less time from in the past. In the past, cooking takes lots of time like – chopping, mixing and then cleaning utensils. The affect of less time for preparing meal is good. Women can use their spare time with their family and friends.

The second reason is availability of variety of equipments like microwave oven, mixer, blender etc. Microwave ovens have made it possible to prepare delicious food quickly. They are convenient/ easy to use. You can make whatever you like to make for your beloved one. Nowadays, you can find variety of food. They are ready to eat and you just need to warm them in microwave. In these days you find healthier food than in the past.

Thanks’ to scientific invention in preserving food for long time. These days, people can find variety of freeze and freezer to preserve food. We can store extra food for long time in freezer and by this way we are saving money, time and as well as food. You find calories guide outside food container and you should know how much calories you are gaining from that? This all thing change our life aspects and made life easier than previous.


In conclusion, our lifestyle is become fast, but people still like good food. New preparation methods, utensils, preservation method gives us more choices. Today we can prepare food that is more convenient, healthier, and of greater variety than ever before in history.

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TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a life sciences class (3)

[Kitosdad]

The twentieth century brings too many inventions into our LIVES. They are not only associated with science but also associated with arts, crafts and many more SUBJECTS. Nowadays we can prepare meals much faster that we could in the past.
I agree with THE author that nowadays food has become easier to prepare and also this change HAS improved the way people live. The main reason is nowadays it take less time than in the past, the availability of different types of utensils and of course THE scientific methodS for preservation.

In THIS century, women have AN equal opportunity to work. They do not have much time for cooking. Nowadays, you can find chopped vegetables, prepared snacks, canNED soup and many more EASY TO SERVE ITEMS.
IN THIS WAY PREPARING MEALS TAKES less time THAN in the past.
In the past, cooking TOOK lots of PREPERATION – chopping, mixing and then cleaning utensils. The affect of less time for preparing A meal is good. Women can SPEND their spare time with their family and friends.

The second reason is THE availability of A variety of equipment like microwave ovenS, mixerS, blenderS etc.
Microwave ovens have made it possible to prepare delicious food quickly. They are convenient/ easy to use. You can make whatever you like to make for your loved oneS. Nowadays, you can find A GREAT variety of foodSTUFFS. They are ready to eat and you just need to warm them in A microwave. In these days you CAN find healthier food than in the past.

Thanks’ to scientific inventionS preserving food for long time IS EASY. These days, people can find A variety of freezerS to preserve food. We can store extra food for A longER time in A freezer and IN this way we are saving money AND time as well as food. You find calories guide ON THE outside OF THE food container and you should know how MANY calories you are gaining from that? ALL THESE thingS change our life aspects and maKe life easier than previousLY.


In conclusion, our lifestyle is becomING fast, but people still like good food. New preparationAL methods, utensils, methodS OF preservation gives us more choices. Today we can prepare food that is more convenient, healthier, and of greater variety than ever before in history.

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A much better essay than your last one Krrish.

Kitos. 11/15
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[Radhichaitu]

Good essay.