#2 (permalink) Tue Mar 16, 2010 8:08 am A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory nearyour comm |
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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory nearyour community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this newinfluence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position.
In our country there are many factories, but I think there are some restrictions IN establishing a factory. It would not be possible WHETHER you want TO BUILD or not without the PERMISSION of the residentS. There are also some advantages and disadvantages.
I don't SUPPORT THE INTENTION THAT any factory will be built TOO near my COMMUNITY. FactorIES should be established far away from the communitiY. Because there WILL BE polLuted air near a factory, and it harms our environment.
Moreover THIS polluted air IS dangerous for mankind. It creates many diseases which are risky. It imbalances our climate and environment. Some factorIES create a large amount OF noise which IS really harmful TO our earS.
It diverts our concentration.
Once upon a time I lived near a factory, so I know how disturbing it was to tolerate the noise. It also makes our LIVES critical. ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
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Kitos.
If the factory produces the essential things what we want then it will be benificial for us.Because we can but it at a low price.Moreover it will create a good job offer for people.Now unemployment rate is so high that it will favour us a little.where the factory will be established the popularity of that town will be increased.Export will be increased.
But i think the disadvantages rate is high.so the factory should be established far away from the communities.Moreover many trees should be established besides the factory because it will decrease the bad effect of the environment.Trees are the life of our environment.So i would not allow any company to build a large factory near my communities.
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