Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teach

[Tonima]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.

A child's future can be bright because of their parents.i agree parents is the best teacher.because in chilhood we are not able to do the righ things.Even we don;t know what is right and wrong.parents have a lot of experience to teach their child in a right way.If we analysis then we can see there are many noble persons who were obeyed by their parents.As for exmple rabindronath .Even when i was child i obeyed my parentss and i think it was right and i can proudly say that parents is the best teacher.Sk , mujibor rahman is another example.He was inspired by their parents and respectful to his parents.Besides our parents we also have to sincere.Otherwise instead of being a good parents it would not be possible to make a bright future.Otherwise environment is a good factor to build a good child.

If the root is good then everything will be alright.That means a parents can give a bright future for a child.So i beliefe parents are the best teacher.

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[Kitosdad]

Good morning Tonima. I'm sorry to say that your essay is full of errors. You have posted three essays, all showing the same errors.
I only hope that you do not intend to take your TOEFL exam in the near future, for you have a lot of learning ahead of you.
Please, DO READ more and do your best to concentrate on the composition of the words.
One well written essay is preferable to three essays all poorly written.

Kitos.
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[Kitosdad]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support
your answer.

A child's future can be bright because of THE INFLUENCE OF their parents.I agree parents ARE the best teacherS, because in chilDhood we are not able to do the righT things.
Even we do NOT know what is right and wrong.
Parents have a lot of experience to teach their child in a right way.
If we analyisE BEHAVIOUR then we can see THAT there are many noble persons who were OBEDIENT TO their parents.

For exAmple rabindronath . When I was child I ALWAYS obeyed my parents and I think it was right TO DO SO and I can proudly say that parents ARE the best teacherS.

Sk , mujibor rahman is another example.He was inspired by HIS parents and ALWAYS respectful to THEM.
Besides our parents we also have to BE sincere, otherwise instead of being good parents it would not be possible to make a bright future for our children.
Otherwise environment is a good factor to build a good child.

If the root OF A CHILDS UPBRINGING is good then everything will be FINE.
That means parents can CREATE a bright future for a child. So I belieVe parents are the best teacherS.
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Kitos.
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[Tonima]

hi kitos,
Thank you for your reply.But how can i improve myself?After reading your comment i am really depressed.It will be possible for me or not.Anyway thaks.

[Kitosdad]

Just try reading more. It really does help. I don't mean read, I mean READ!
Read out loud. Speak every word and listen to how you are forming the sentences.
Listening is one of the most effective ways of learning. That's how you learned to speak your own language isn't it?

Give it a try, and come back and post a great essay. READ and TALK.

Kitos.
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[Tonima]

Hi kitos,
After hearing from you i am really happy.Now i can see a little hope.To improve my reading i am now reading novels.I don't know it will be good or not.English is not my mother language.That's why it creates a problem.But i want to improve my condition.If possible then tell me how can i do well in toefl within a short time.Although my condition is not good but i want to know.I am really grateful to you for giving me such type of good suggestions.Thanks a lot.

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Tomina. I understand your position, really I do.
Please read my posting at the top of the thread regarding what happens after you pass the TOEFL exam.

Kitos.
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[Iron Lady]

I also wrote essay please check it
I agree with this think that parents are best teachers,because children's behaves depend on parents. If parents learn them how to be wee-mannered, how to differ from others according to your conduction.Parents first must understand children importance of education. Mostly children when begin go to school they have not willing to go school,they can not adapt to new environment. When I was a child I thought that if I went to school teachers would beat me. I was so afraid that , when mother left me at school I began to cry. But then my mother at home explained me that it was you second home there teachers would be very kind , frank to you, they would teach you how to write, how to read and etc. After my mother's advice I began to love school and never was afraid of it.Childrens attitudes to other people also depend on parents. For example if parents regard to children rudely children also will attitude to others in that form.Parents must teach their children how to behave truly to adults.For example to learn children that when you see an old man that can not cross a road, or can not carry luggages you have to help him or her to cross a road or to carry luggages.Parents also have to induce children to read books. For example if my parents did not induce me to read books mostly fiction books I would never have interest to read books. Or parents have to explain importance of education at school. They must understand to children that if you do not want to study at school you will never success in you future life, for you it will be very difficult to enter a university.My parents have 3 daughters and a boy all of them my parents learned us that I remindede above.I see that perants' advice has big influence to children.

[Tonima]

Hi kitos,
Thank you very much.Now, i think i can improve my condition by this way.After reading this eassy, i am thinking if i were a good writer.It is really a good writing.But when i write a eassy i can't arrange everything so well.Anyway thanks for your reply.

[Rafa1030]

I wrote an essay about this topic too.
Probably one of the most difficulties responsibilities of the adult life is to raise a child. Since I became a father myself I had been worried about how would be the best way to do so and where you will do that is likely to be a hard decision. I had been raised in a big city, however I regret to say that I couldn´t imagine myself raising my children in the same way which my parents did. Big city problems such as quality of life and hard daily routine might have a huge impact in parents and children relation and really hamper the way do they expect to raise their kids.
A family in a big city surely faces difficulties as a hard daily routine. Firstly, parents probably spent hours to leave their children at school and a few more to arrive at work place because of traffic jams and the same to go back home. At the end of the day parents would be so tired that a simple kids request as playing cards could be extremely annoying. This fact just illustrates the poor quality of life at big cities and how it should influence parents and kids relations. Certainly, countryside quality of life will be better, with a less stressful routine parents should be able to spent more time, and enjoy it, with their children.
There are a lot of differences between countryside and big city raised children. In last one, children are more exposed to modern life and subjected to its bad influences such as poor air quality and the lack of natural environment preservation. In addition to that, people tend to be more worried about their own lives and unconsciously avoid new friendship relations; this fact could have a huge impact on kids raising who are likely to be future adults that don´t have too much concern about such important thing as friends. In the other hand, countryside air quality certainly it is better than any big city and people don´t tend to avoid friends.
As a parent, I think that smaller places should be better to raise my children. Particularly, I just want to provide ways and knowledge enough to allow them to have good sense about their social and natural environment in order to find their happiness in the future.
As the main point, the place where someone would raise or not their children is a complex, and particular, decision. Parents need to evaluate what do they expect and the family aims and necessities. However, smaller places should be better to raise a child, in a calm place and without a hard routine, parents should improve their kids childhood.

regards,
Rafael

[Kitosdad]

Rafael, You are requested to post your essay as a "New Topic." If you just add your essay at the end of a previous one, it will be ignored.
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