toefl® essay:People attend college or university for many different reasons

[Civilengineer]

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People attend college or university for many different reasons. Why do you think people attend college or university? Use reasons and examples to support your answer.

People attend college for a lot of reasons. I personally believe that the three most common reasons are career preparation get more and new experiences and increase their knowledge of themselves and of the world around them.

From my point of view career preparation is the primary reason that people attend college. These days, people who want to work for a company should learn skills before getting the job. As far as I am aware people want increase their opportunity in the future should learn skills in college and get degree.

On the other hand students can get new experiences. For instance for many it is the first time they are away from their home. Meanwhile they can learn from other students from other city. Moreover they can learn to live on their own and take care of themselves without being near their family and having parents help.

As well as students can increase their knowledge in college. They learn a lot with interact with their classmates. They also, of course have opportunity to learn about many subjects in their class.

In conclusion, these three reasons career preparation get more and new experiences and increase their knowledge can be appropriate reason people attend college.

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[Kitosdad]

People attend college for a lot of reasons. I personally believe that the three most common reasons are career preparation, TO get more and new experiences and increase their knowledge of themselves and of the world around them.

From my point of view career preparation is the primary reason that people attend college. These days, people who want to work for a company should learn skills before APPLYING FOR ANY job. As far as I am aware people WHO want i TOncrease their opportunitIES in the future should learn skills in college and get A degree.

On the other hand students can get new experiences.
For instance, for many it is the first time they are away from their homeS.
Meanwhile they can learn from other students from other CITIES.
Moreover they can learn to live on their own and take care of themselves without being near their family and having THEIR parents help.

Students can ALSO increase their knowledge in college. They learn a lot BY interactING with their classmates. They also, of course have THE opportunity to learn about many subjects in their class.

In conclusion, these three reasons; career preparation, gaining more and newER experiences and increasING their knowledge can be SEEN AS THE appropriate reasonS FOR people attendING college.
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Not bad CE.

Kitos.
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[Civilengineer]

thanks a lot dear kitos