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[Krrish1192]

How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reason and specific examples to support your answers.

Televisions are become most popular and entertainment communication. Nowadays we are spending our most leisure time to watching television and movie, so of course this will affect our behavior. The effect of television and movies on people’s behavior is positive.

Televisions are most important things for information on current issues in the world. Also movies give some valuable message to people. Like “Titanic” gives a message about love and sacrifice for our loved one. If you like know about “Haiti’s earthquake” just turn on television and you find lots of information on different channels. Are you student? And interested in science and just turn on discovery or animal planet channels.

Furthermore, television brings many programs which are associated with real life of people. Therefore, people can draw their own lessons from those cases. For example, on television there is one program 'Intervention’, by this program people could come to know how to behave in certain case and then apply into their real lives. The movie on television increases social behavior of people. People can learn that how to interact with other types of people. Television brings a huge source of entertainment and by that way it making people lives more pleasant. After working for all days, tried from responsibility you have done, you need to stay at home, lying on bed to enjoy your favorite shows or movie gives you relaxation. In general, television has clearly become an essential part in people life.

Some people arguing that because of the television people become violent, less active and less imaginative. This is somewhat true but their advantages is over weigh disadvantages.

Every coin has two sides, like that television and movies have also some advantages and disadvantages. But it depend on people, how they taking the information which is provided by this things.

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Kitos,
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Krrish

TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of History (2)

[Kitosdad]

How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reason and specific examples to support your answers.

Televisions HAVE become THE most popular FORM OF entertainment communication. Nowadays we are spending MOST OF OUR leisure time watching television and movieS, so of course this will affect our behavior. The effect of television and movies on people’s behavior is positive.

Televisions are THE most important MEANS OF OBTAINING information on current issues in the world. Also movies give some valuable messageS to people. Like “Titanic” gives a message about love and sacrifice for our loved one. If you like TO know MORE about “Haiti’s earthquake” just turn on YOUR television and you WILL find lots of information on different channels.
Are you A student and interested in science? Just turn on Discovery or Animal Planet channels.

Furthermore, television brings TO US many programs which are associated with THE real LIVES of people. Therefore, people can draw their own lessons from those cases. For example, on television there is one program CALLED 'Intervention’.
IN this program people could come to know how to behave in certain caseS and then apply WHAT THEY LEARN into their real lives.

The movieS on television increases THE social behavior of people. People can learn how to interact with other types of people.
Television brings a huge source of entertainment, and by that way it makES people lives more pleasant.
After working all day, TIRED from THE responsibilitIES you have BORNE, you need to stay at home, lying IN bed.
To enjoy your favorite shows or movieS gives you relaxation. In general, television has clearly become an essential part in people'S LIVES.

Some people arguE that because of the television people become violent, less active and less imaginative. This is somewhat true but their advantages OUTweigh THE disadvantages.

Every coin has two sides. Television and movies have MANY advantages and disadvantages. It dependS on people, AND how they takE the information which is provided by this MEDIUM.
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Good morning Krrish. You KNEW this essay was poor before you posted it. Why did you waste both of our times?
You need to jot down the points you want to make on a piece of paper before committing yourself to writing your essay.
Random thoughts are of little interest when not written in an interesting format.
Please take some time to review this essay and have another attempt to make it better.

Kitos. 6/10
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