please check my second essay and tell me the errors

[Mona1]

Do you agree or disagree with this statment ?
It is much easier to learn in a small class than in a large one.
Use specific example and reasons to support your answer.
I prefer to study in large class than small one ,others like to study in small on every body has his own reasons of his option.
I think that when the class was large and considerable it will be benifit for students and teachers ,in large class that contains students from various contries can share their experiences and improve their culture knowledge ,for example every one describes him custom and his contry culture for others students,moreover,large class is convient and confortable and can breath healthy because its large and the air can come through the windows.
In large class every body takes care and interested in his work,I mean there will be challenge in the class between the students to do the best in their work ,because large class contains people mor than small one,
If teacher want to do groupe work,he can divides students to several group and he constitutes various group wich every gruop contains appropriate students that can make a great work,and they will made integrated work because they are mor than small class .
In large class may be I meet people from several neighbourhoods and contries ,therefor i make them my friends in the future to participate our culture.
I know sometimes teacher can not dominates about large class because there are more people than small one, but if he had resolve and strong character no thing impossible.

At last and not least,the most affective way to control about large class ,especialy if it contained more students ,is make them love you and respect you,and make your relationships based on trust and honest ,
I believe that the professional and intelligent can acheives this balance.

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and his counselor

[Kitosdad]

I prefer to study in A large class RATHER than A small one, SOME others like to study in A small onE. Everybody has THEIR own reasons TO CHOOSE THIS option.
I think that when the class IS large it will be OF benEfit TO students and teachers.

In A large class that contains students from various contries ONE can share their experiences and improve their culturAL knowledge.
For example, every one describes THEIR customS and THEIR coUntry'S culture TO THE others students,moreover, A large class is convEN ient and coMfortable and YOU can breath healthy because it IS large and the air can come through the windows.

(I think you are now confusing the physical size of the room, as opposed to the number of people in the room.)

In A large class everybody takes care and IS interested in his work. I mean there will be A challenge in the class between the students to do the best in their work, because A large class contains MORE people than A small one,
If THE teacher wantS THE CLASS to do group work, he can divide THE students INto several groupS.
He ORGANISES groupS SO THAT EACH GROUP contains THE appropriate students that can DO BETTER work, and they will WORK TOGETHER MORE SUCCESSFULLY.
In A large class maybe I WILL meet people from several neighbourhoods and coUntries , thereforE I make them my friends in the future to participate our culture.
I know sometimes teacher cannot EASILY CONTROL SUCH A VERY large class because there are more people than IN A small one, but if he HAS resolve and A strong character nothing IS impossible.

Last BUT not least,the most Effective way to control A large class ,especialLy if it containS A LOT OF students is TO make them love and respect you, and TO FORM your relationships based on trust and honestY ,
I believe that the professional and intelligent TEACHER can acheive this balance.
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Good morning Mona.You certainly worked hard on this topic. In spite of your inability to put properly into words what you wanted to say, you did well.
You do need to spend more time reading and taking note of the structure of sentences.
Please read some essays of the other writers here on the thread. You may pick up some good ideas.

Kitos. 6/10
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