Hi .. Please grade my Essay and point out my mistakes.

[PinkQueen]

Hi,
It is my first essay. Hope I will get proper response.
Thanks in advance.
New Topic: Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
From my point of view to study alone is better than study in the group. Both have some advantages and disadvantages. I will try my level best to summarize main points.
In my opinion, I like to study alone in a peaceful environment and will be capable to fully concentrate on my studies because in disturbance I cannot study well. I can manage my time accordingly. To study in a group is somehow good but only when you have already read about the subject. If you have nothing in your mind regarding the topic then it will be the wastage of time as you will be dependent on others thinking and concepts and you cannot articulate the others concepts are right. Once you have built wrong concepts about the topic in your mind then it will be difficult to confiscate this. To study in a group is good to some extent that you will get confidence. You will be able to present your ideas in front of others and this is the biggest success for the future career.
According to me, first I will study alone and then I will study in a group so that I could participate properly and my knowledge will help others. Once I had full grasp over the topic I will be confident to discuss about any topic and also it will be beneficial for me; to get advantage from the others knowledge or to correct them if they were wrong in their concepts. For example, in my high school, I was used to study with a group and I felt it takes too much time to cover even one topic and it will created so much anxiety in me when I did not fulfil my objective.
I would like to study alone as I would be able to manage the time for each subject. If I were studying in a group, I would have wasted my time in arguing with others. As everyone has its own way to get the knowledge. To study in a group is the wastage of the time. Because others have their own style and you will be stuck on one point.
In this competitive life everyone wants to be in the front line and is trying for best future career. If you will study hard there will be greater chances to reach the destination. Everyone has their own key points from which they can get good positions.
In conclusion, I would like to say that study alone is better than study in a group because I can better manage my time. I can decide how efficiently I have to use my time and prepare myself to face the life challenges with my knowledge.

Thanks,

Pink Queen

TOEFL listening discussions: What is Dr Schmidt researching?

[Kitosdad]

New Topic: Some students prefer to study alone. Others prefer to study with a group of students. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

From my point of view to study alone is better than studyING in A group. Both have some advantages and disadvantages. I will try my level best to summarize MY main points.

In my opinion, I like to study alone in a peaceful environment and THERE I will be capable OF fully concentratING on my studies because in A disturbance I cannot study well.
I can manage my time accordingly.
To study in a group is somehow good, but only when you have already read about the subject. If you have nothing in your mind regarding the topic then it will be a wastE of time as you will be dependent UPon others thinking and concepts and you cannot DEPEND ON the others concepts BEING right.
Once you have built wrong concepts about the topic in your mind then it will be difficult to ELIMINATE THEM.
To study in a group is good to some extent BECAUSE you will FEEL confidencT.
You will be able to present your ideas in front of others and this is the biggest success for YOUR future career.

According to me, first I will study alone and then I will study in a group, so that I could participate properly and my knowledge will help others. Once I had full grasp over the topic I will be confident to discuss about any topic, and also it will be beneficial for me to get THE BENEFIT from the others knowledge or to correct them if they were wrong in their concepts.
For example, in my high school, I was used to studyING withIN a group and I felt it TOOK too much time to cover even one topic and it created so much anxiety in me when I did not fulfil my objective.

I would like to study alone as I would be able to manage the time for each subject.
If I were studying in a group I would have wasted my time in arguing with others.
As everyone has THEIR own way to get the knowledge. To study in a group is A COMPLETE wastE of time, because others have their own style and you will be stuck on one point.
In this competitive life everyone wants to be in the front line and is trying for best future careerS. If you will study hard there will be greater chances to reach the destination. Everyone has their own key points FOR which they can EARN good positions.

In conclusion, I would like to say that TO study alone is better than studyING in a group because I can better manage my time. I can decide how efficiently I have to use my time and prepare myself to face the challenges OF LIFE with my knowledge.
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That was fine Pink Queen.

Kitos. 7/10
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[PinkQueen]

[Kitosdad]

Oh PQ, that is some question! However, I will give you some examples of the use of the word. You will see the uses are varied and perhaps confusing to you, but here goes:

"Are you being funny?"
" I am not used to being treat so well."
"He felt he was being falsely accused by the police."
"Being so close to you is nice."
"You are not being very friendly towards them."
"It's being so happy that keeps me going."
"I think they don't like being kept waiting."

As you can see, there are so many ways of your using this word. Most dictionaries only say it is a noun, and follow up with some irrelevant examples of its use.

Kitos.
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[PinkQueen]

Hi Kitto, Thank you so much... sometime simple words confuse me... now it is ok.... I am happy that at least you answered my question...
You know Mr. Kitto when I was doing my project in a company. It was multinational company.. When I first time visited I said simple thing to one of the manager... I said, maybe sometimes I will ask some stupid and so simple questions and sometimes I will ask questions again and again so please do not mind as I am student I am not professional... You know Mr. Kitto what did he reply? He said just remember one thing that "Question never be stupid Answer may be stupid" He has given me a simple example as: let suppose you will ask me that Why do you use this paper rack? It is a valid question If I will reply that You cannot observe that it is a paper rack... This is a stupid answer....

I am happy that at least you answered my question and you did not ignore this.. Thanks alot..

Be happy always...

Good Night

Pink Queen