Essay: Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like...

[Pasban110]

Hello,
I wrote another essay about this topic. I hope that you enjoy it:

Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Friends are who you can spend some happy and enjoyable time with them. I think classifying friends will help you to spend your time more effectively. I classified may friends into three groups as follow:
Friends in group one are my best friends those who I am really comfortable and feel easy with them, and of course I trust them and use their advice for my challenges. The relationship with these friends is really strong. Friends in second group are those ones who I just like them, and I feel just easy with them, and that is all. The third group friends are those who I just say 'Hello,' and 'how do you do'.
By these groups, I would like to spend most of my time with the friends in the first group. The friends in the second group are good to spend my spare time. When I am free, it is good to keep my friendship with this group by spending some of my time to know them more. To choose my class one friends of course I need to examine and upgrade my friendship with friends in other groups. In some aspects, I need to check their trustiness and reliability coefficient which are my most important rules to group up my friends.
However, the reasons that I would like to be with my class one friends would be to do school work and practice English. When we do the exams together, or talk to each other in English, it really help both or all of us to understand the solution much faster than in the case of studying alone. Another good reason is that we share our experiences. I myself would like to talk about my problems, and ask my friends to show me a way, and help me to overcome to my weakness, or make a good decision. Many times I have made a wrong, weak and rush decision, but by the help of mind sharing with my friends, I have done a good ones. I love brainstorming, and I always encourage my friends to do that. When you are with your friends, you are going to know another human's behavior in a close look.
To sum up, I like to spend most of my time with my best friends. It helps me to know my friends, strength my friendship, make decisions more effectively, and learn how to live with others.

Dear Kitos, would you mind to evaluate and score this essay for me?
Thanks in advance.

-Salivan

P.S.
Hello Kitos, how do you do? I hope you do well. I should thank you for all your precious efforts to help all of us to improve ourselves. When I started to write my first essay, everything was very horrible for me. It makes me laugh when I am thinking of that period of time. But you Kitos and one of our friends, MixiMix, of course you know him, encouraged me to start writing. You helped me to overcome to my fear of writing. I have not read texts carefully, I have just simply skimmed them before you advised me to read a lot of them but this time carefully.

Thank you very much.



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[Kitosdad]

Hello,
I wrote another essay about this topic. I hope that you enjoy it:

Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of the time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Friends are THOSE PEOPLE WITH WHOM you can spend some happy and enjoyable time. I think classifying friends will help you to spend your time more effectively. I have classified MY friends into three groups as follow:
Friends in group one are my best friends; those WITH whoM I am really comfortable WITH and feel AT easE with, and of course I trust them and use their advice for my challenges.
The relationship with these friends is really strong.

Friends in second group are those ones who I just like , and I feel just easy with them, and that is all.

The third group OF friends are those who I just say 'Hello,' and 'how do you do'.
I would like to spend most of my time with the friends in the first group.
The friends in the second group are good to spend my spare time WITH.
When I am free, it is good to keep my friendship with this group by spending some of my time to GET TO know them more.

To choose my class one friends I need to examine and upgrade my friendship with friends in other groups. In some aspects, I need to check their trustWORTHiness and reliability coefficient which are my most important rules to group up my friends.

However, the reasons that I would like to be with my class one friends would be to do school work and practice English. When we do the exams together, or talk to each other in English, it really help both or all of us to understand the solution much faster than in the case of studying alone.

Another good reason is that we share our experiences. I myself would like to talk about my problems, and ask my friends to show me a way TOhelp me to overcome my weakness, or TO SUGGEST HOW I CAN ARRIVE AT a good decision.
Many times I have made a wrong, weak and rushED decision, but WITH the help of MY sharing with my friends, I have FINALLY REACHED a good ones.
I love brainstorming, and I always encourage my friends to do that. When you are with your friends you are going to OBSERVE another PERSONS behavior.

To sum up: I like to spend most of my time with my best friends. It helps me to know my friends, strength OUR friendship, make decisions more effectively, and learn how to live with others.
::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::Good morning Salivan. You have it within you to become a proficient writer. Just continue on your present course and you will get there. Keep reading, and more importantly, understanding.

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[Pasban110]

Thank you very much dear Kitos.
I am working out.

Best regards,

-Salivan