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[Daphnes]

Schools should ask students to evaluate their teachers. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Present time, business life is expecting well qualified people in their field. For this reason education systems build up their perspectives and quality. Having a good teacher is one important point to reach success. Parents and school systems started to pay much more attention teachers quality. In my opinion, students would evaluate their teachers teaching method and knowledge about their major. A teacher should have a great degree from well named university, but it is not enough to be a good teacher. A teacher looks like very interested in his job, but anyone can know that his teaching strategies are really good for the students.

We know that being a teacher required a long education life and many important exams to get permission to work as a teacher. When the school management hires the teachers, they care about this so much but for my experience says it is not a criteria being a good teacher. I had an English teacher who had graduated from a good college recently and looked like master about her major. She wasn’t enough for our expecting and any of students didn’t want to study her lesson. To show to our anxious is good for her to improve her teaching skills.

Another thing is sometimes people can impact their environment very good that they show their experiences are very good and they are eager to teach to students. But the other side of mirror is totally different. I think that teaching is a kind of ability while some people can do it very well others not. Classroom is the only place can theacher should evaluate very well.

Students evaluation is not like a contest, their evaluation might help to teacher how they can improve their occupational skills. It is like costumer and salesperson relationship, isn’t it? If the salesperson is good attitude, costumers might choose their store and will be happy both of side. To get feedback from the students is very important for the teachers because students are the costumers for the teachers. Their good is their knowledge and transferring the knowledge is the goal of education system. In this aspect, I think evaluation the teachers by the students is a good way to be a qualified teachers and education systems.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a life sciences class (4)

[Kitosdad]

Good evening Daphnes. Your essay is very well laid out, but very poorly constructed.
I really am at a loss as to explain your failure to transmit your opinion to the reader. One thing I would say is, do not entertain the idea of taking a TOEFL exam for some time. You need to do lots of reading to recognise how to compose informative sentences.
Keep submitting your essays and we will try to help you as much as we can.

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