New topic: One should never judge a person by external appearance. Do you agree o

[Demon]

One should never judge a person by external appearance. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

When we first meet a person, we often judge one/A/ person based on his or her external appearance. We say that because that is just because we do not know much about that PERSON and one’s face can show us more about THEIR personality. As far as I am concerned, I believe that we should not evaluate someone just by his or her external appearance.

The appearance is deceptive. When you see beautiful girls or handsome boys, you may think that they are good, and THAT you do not need to take precautions when we are near them. But it only depends on your feeling, and there is no clue that they are good or bad.
For instance, there are many good looking boys now WHO go cheating around. They say that they sell things for charity organizations, and we believe that. But after reading REPORTS IN THE newspaper, I realize that is only a trick to sell A company’s products.

Most of us often draw a short conclusion on one’s character when we first get acquainted to THEM. As for me, external appearanceS does not reflect anything because it is only one small part of A human beings CHARACTER. Furthermore, we cannot choose our personal appearance, just only our thoughts and our behavior.

Last but not least, before judging anyone with ONLY BE THEIR external appearance, one should keep in mind that a wrong judgement and its implication can lead to real regrets later. When we judge someone just because of their external appearance, we COULD have A bad impression about THEM which leads to a VERY WRONG appreciation about their internal features. We need to spend a long time with them to understand clearly everything about them.

To sum up, I think everyone is equal, regardless of THEIR appearances. We should know all about their internal features and external appearance to MAKE a fair judgement.
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There you go Demon. Hope this helps you a little. Don't think that these are big mistakes, because they are not. A couple of days reading will automatically put all these small faults right.

Kitos.

TOEFL listening lectures: A lecture from a life sciences class (2)

[Kitosdad]

Good morning Demon, Your work gets better and better. You have one or two very small mistakes here, but you are now beginning to think in English, and that is a good sign of your subconscious mind telling your conscious mind that it now has to deal with two languages. I'm proud of you.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Demon]

Good morning Kitos.
It will be great if you can show me my small mistakes. I just want to know to avoid it next time.
Thanks a lot for your help, my friend.

[Kitosdad]

One should never judge a person by external appearance. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea.

When we first meet a person, we often judge one/A/ person based on his or her external appearance. We say that because that is just because we do not know much about that PERSON and one’s face can show us more about THEIR personality. As far as I am concerned, I believe that we should not evaluate someone just by his or her external appearance.

The appearance is deceptive. When you see beautiful girls or handsome boys, you may think that they are good, and THAT you do not need to take precautions when we are near them. But it only depends on your feeling, and there is no clue that they are good or bad.
For instance, there are many good looking boys now WHO go cheating around. They say that they sell things for charity organizations, and we believe that. But after reading REPORTS IN THE newspaper, I realize that is only a trick to sell A company’s products.

Most of us often draw a short conclusion on one’s character when we first get acquainted to THEM. As for me, external appearanceS does not reflect anything because it is only one small part of A human beings CHARACTER. Furthermore, we cannot choose our personal appearance, just only our thoughts and our behavior.

Last but not least, before judging anyone with ONLY BE THEIR external appearance, one should keep in mind that a wrong judgement and its implication can lead to real regrets later. When we judge someone just because of their external appearance, we COULD have A bad impression about THEM which leads to a VERY WRONG appreciation about their internal features. We need to spend a long time with them to understand clearly everything about them.

To sum up, I think everyone is equal, regardless of THEIR appearances. We should know all about their internal features and external appearance to MAKE a fair judgement.
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There you go Demon. Hope this helps you a little. Don't think that these are big mistakes, because they are not. A couple of days reading will automatically put all these small faults right.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Demon]

Thanks for your correction Kitos.
I will read it again and make sure that it will be better next time. :)

[Demon]

Hi Kitos,
I just notice this sentence
" Last but not least, before judging anyone with ONLY BE THEIR external appearance"

I think you mean ONLY BY THEIR. Is it right?