correct sentence for negotiation.

[AmitHorizon]

I am going to write some sentence to shopkeeper for negotiation.would you please check my sentences and correct it.

Dear ------

I have purchase material dt .01.01.10 on 35% Discount.every month I maintain inventory of same item.I would like to same discount on further order.Please confirm final discount.

[HamburgEnglish]

Hi Amit,

I think this is what you mean.

I have past purchased items from you at a 35% discount. I wish to maintain stock of these items on a monthly basis. I would like to receive the same discount on my further orders. Please would you confirm your agreement.

Rob
http://www.hamburg-english.eu
Englisch für den Beruf, Hamburg.

[Kitosdad]

:-)) Oh Rob, not really.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[HamburgEnglish]

It could be cockroaches?

Whoops did I miss out a "to" ?

Ok all done.

Na Ja, the letter is a little blunt for negotiation, but you can't rewrite everything or?

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