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Can somebody help me? #1 (permalink) Thu Apr 01, 2010 18:13 pm   Can somebody help me?
 

Can somebody correct all the mistakes in this text..?? Please :)

Personal information

Name: my name
Mobile: (Estonian mobile number)
E-mail: my mail
Age: I was born 27December 1987 that makes me 22years old

Work experience:

I have worked in england before for 4 months, in a company named
Rapid Employment & Recruitment

Date: December 2006 - March 2007

I did different factory jobs for them.
Their homepage is http://www.rapid-employment.com/

In estonia i have worked in two places.

In AS Statoil - where i was a shopceaper
and my last job was in Meeskond Security OÜ- there i worked as a security guard.

Education:

I have a High School education and when i will leave england in a couple of years then i am planning to go study in a university Estonia.

Languages:

I speak both Russian and Estonian fluently and i hadveno problems understanding english anf speaking is a little bit harder but i can manage it.
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Can somebody help me? #2 (permalink) Thu Apr 01, 2010 21:01 pm   Can somebody help me?
 

Hi, Hellohellohello

I'm sorry but there are too many mistakes.
(England, Estonia - write with capital letter; shopceaper - may be shopkeeper? etc.)

Apart from that I would recommand you to modify it. I hope these links will be useful for you.

http://www.englishlink.com/free-english-tools/create-resume.htm
http://www.englishelp.ru/learn-english/business-english/91-resume-in-english.html
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Can somebody help me? #3 (permalink) Thu Apr 08, 2010 12:01 pm   Can somebody help me?
 

Hellohellohello wrote:
Can somebody correct all the mistakes in this text..?? Please :)


I would suggest the following:

Personal information

Name: my name
Mobile: (Estonian mobile number)
E-mail: my mail
Age: 22 years old (born 27th December 1987)

Work experience:

I have previously worked in England for 4 months, for a company named
Rapid Employment & Recruitment, where I was employed as a factory worker.
Their website is http://www.rapid-employment.com/ (If you can give an e-mail address of a person you dealt with, that would be better)
Date: December 2006 - March 2007

In Estonia, my employment history is

In AS Statoil, where I was employed as a shopkeeper (You should give the dates/contact details)
In Meeskond Security OÜ, where I was employed as a security guard. (Again you need to give dates/contact details)

Education:
I have a High School Education.

Future Plans:
I intend gaining work experience in England for several years, before going back to Estonia to study at University.

Languages:
I speak both Russian and Estonian fluently. I speak English reasonably well, and generally have no problems understanding it.
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