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#2 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:02 am Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Should children be taught sexual education in school? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.
Childhood is that stage of life when the human being begins to learn about everything which surrounds him. At this moment of life a child forms his world through what he sees and feels. If a child lives in a violent society, then violence will make part of his world and his whole life is probably to be shaped by violence. There are many other kinds of bad behaviour adopted by children as normal actions, such as domestic violence, rape and paedophilia which may cause damage to their morality and consequently will affect their development. A school is a perfect place where all these misconceptions can be removed and substituted by an excellent pattern of life. But before we teach them this good style of life we should give them the real picture of the world so that they can be concerned about what’s going on in their societies and prevent them for activities related with sexual abuse amongst others. That’s why I believe that sexual education must be included in the school program. Sexuality is an important issue today once children are exposed to the obscenity and imprudent contents. Sexual education can protect children against pornography networks or help girls to avoid precocious pregnancy. These kinds of lessons can also help to break the old prejudices related to female discrimination. Each boy and girl must be taught that they are all the same and all deserve to be respected in the same way. In conclusion, I reaffirm that children should be taught sexual education because certainly one day they will be dealing with the social problems mentioned above so it's important to prepare them in advance. Teaching sexual education at school will prevent the adults of tomorrow making the same mistakes that adults from today have done in the past. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: Excellent work Tomas. Kitos. 10/10 _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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#3 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:20 am Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Thank you once again for spending your time correcting it, Kitos. I did not expect such points. I will continue to work in order to improve more. Thanks Kitos. _________________ Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:59 am Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Tomas, with old Kitos you only get what you deserve, and your essay definitely deserved 10. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

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#5 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:32 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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| I hope to get like this scors, I will try to acheive it |
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#6 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:40 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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| Kitosdad wrote: |
| Tomas, with old Kitos you only get what you deserve, and your essay definitely deserved 10. |
My big friend... _________________ Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

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#7 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:42 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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| Mona1 wrote: |
| I hope to get like this scors, I will try to acheive it |
Yes, you can get. _________________ Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

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#8 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 13:17 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Hi Tomas,
You are an excellent writer.
Regards _________________ Practice makes perfect. |
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#9 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 17:42 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Thank you my Nnzuahp! I appreciate your comments. Have a good day my friend. _________________ Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

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#10 (permalink) Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:55 am Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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It was an excellent one. I have a lot to learn from you!
Lubov _________________ Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow. The important thing is not to stop questioning.
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#11 (permalink) Wed Apr 07, 2010 13:05 pm Should Children be taught sexual education in school |
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Many thanks Lubov. _________________ Education is a progressive discovery of our own ignorance.
- Will Durant |
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Tomasito I'm here quite often ;-)

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