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Should Children be taught sexual education in school



 
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #1 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 9:44 am   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Should children be taught sexual education in school? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

Childhood is a stage of life when the human being starts to learn about everything which surrounds him. At this moment of life a child draws his world through what he sees and feels. If a child lives in a violent society, then violence will make part of his world and his whole life is probably to be shaped by violence. There are many other kinds of bad behaviour adopted by children as normal actions such as domestic violence, rape and pedophilia which may cause damages to their morality and consequently will affect their development.
A school is a perfect place where all these misconcepts can be removed and substituted by an excellent pattern of life. But before we teach them this good style of life we should give them the real picture of the world so that they can be concerned about what’s going on in their societies and prevent them for activities related with sexual abuse amongst others. That’s why I believe that sexual education must be included in the school program. Sexuality is an important issue today once children are very exposed to the obscenity and imprudent contents. Sexual education can protect children against pornography network or avoid girls to get precocious pregnancy. This kind of lessons can also help to break the old prejudices related to women discrimination. Each boy and girl must be taught that they are the same and all deserve to be respected in the same way.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that children should be taught sexual education because certainly one day they will be dealing with social problems mentioned above so it's important to prepare them in advance. Teaching sexual education at school will prevent adults from tomorrow make the same mistakes that adults from today have done.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #2 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:02 am   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Should children be taught sexual education in school? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

Childhood is that stage of life when the human being begins to learn about everything which surrounds him. At this moment of life a child forms his world through what he sees and feels. If a child lives in a violent society, then violence will make part of his world and his whole life is probably to be shaped by violence. There are many other kinds of bad behaviour adopted by children as normal actions, such as domestic violence, rape and paedophilia which may cause damage to their morality and consequently will affect their development.
A school is a perfect place where all these misconceptions can be removed and substituted by an excellent pattern of life. But before we teach them this good style of life we should give them the real picture of the world so that they can be concerned about what’s going on in their societies and prevent them for activities related with sexual abuse amongst others. That’s why I believe that sexual education must be included in the school program. Sexuality is an important issue today once children are exposed to the obscenity and imprudent contents. Sexual education can protect children against pornography networks or help girls to avoid precocious pregnancy. These kinds of lessons can also help to break the old prejudices related to female discrimination. Each boy and girl must be taught that they are all the same and all deserve to be respected in the same way.
In conclusion, I reaffirm that children should be taught sexual education because certainly one day they will be dealing with the social problems mentioned above so it's important to prepare them in advance. Teaching sexual education at school will prevent the adults of tomorrow making the same mistakes that adults from today have done in the past.
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Excellent work Tomas.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #3 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 10:20 am   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Thank you once again for spending your time correcting it, Kitos.
I did not expect such points. I will continue to work in order to improve more.
Thanks Kitos.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #4 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:59 am   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Tomas, with old Kitos you only get what you deserve, and your essay definitely deserved 10.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #5 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:32 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

I hope to get like this scors, I will try to acheive it
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #6 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:40 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Kitosdad wrote:
Tomas, with old Kitos you only get what you deserve, and your essay definitely deserved 10.

My big friend...
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #7 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:42 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Mona1 wrote:
I hope to get like this scors, I will try to acheive it

Yes, you can get.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #8 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 13:17 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Hi Tomas,

You are an excellent writer.

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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #9 (permalink) Tue Apr 06, 2010 17:42 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Thank you my Nnzuahp!
I appreciate your comments.
Have a good day my friend.
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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #10 (permalink) Wed Apr 07, 2010 10:55 am   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

It was an excellent one.
I have a lot to learn from you!

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Should Children be taught sexual education in school #11 (permalink) Wed Apr 07, 2010 13:05 pm   Should Children be taught sexual education in school
 

Many thanks Lubov.
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