What is real love and how to achieve it?

[Samiralbayati]

What is real love and how to achieve it?

People around the world tend to make relationships with others whether relationship amongst parents and our family relatives or with our lovers, the last one is always between two completely different genders (males and female).

As I mentioned above, I have divided relationships amongst people in two sections, for this division, obviously, love between our nearest friends is different from our wives, husbands. there is no doubt that nowadays less people believe in relationships, the majority of us think these rapports we have made are endangered and are becoming quite unimportant in this era, they mean that most of our friends are liers, actually, they sit and wake with us just to satisfy us they think of long term profits when they might needs us to support them from difficult situation,and really that is the truth of our relationships we can not deny. eal love nowadays is almost unhonest, because of several reasons I will mention them as follows.

competition in technology lead us to be selfish and to be more and more competitive, for instance, the Internet has restricted our rapports and make us spend most of our daily life in our homes, offices, and other places which are separated from social life and from our external environment.

On the other hand, if we revise our selves and return back not too far just before 100 years ago, when the greatest ship around the world dived in the bottom of the ocean. this even can educate us and tell us much about the honest emotions, and real love which happened amongst two beautiful loves who are jack( LEONARDO DICAPRIO) and rose( KATE WINSLET) . they acted very well in this movie they really have teach us what love means. when this lady(rose )loved this guy (jack) from just first look and he also exchanged her emotions .in spite of that, this girl was from aristocracy, while the guy was from poor layer in society, but all these differences did not distinguishe and eliminate their love rather that these differences combined them more and more and pushed them to explore their different outlooks, knowledges, thinks in the life.
we must conclude that love do not know borders between people from different status in society.

To sum up, I think thatlove nowadays is almost had faded, and it is not fair to compare love in one time ago with love in our meantime.

TOEFL listening lectures: Why does the professor mention Mona Lisa?

[Kitosdad]

I am sorry my friend. You really HAVE to learn the rules of Basic English before attempting to write an essay.

You HAVE to know when to bring a sentence to a stop with a full-stop.
You Have to restart by using a Capital letter.
You Have to use a Capital letter for peoples names.

Perhaps your father thinks it is easy to learn to write an essay correctly ... it isn't!
You need weeks of further study and practice. You cannot hope to take an exam in a short time.

Ask your father to hire a private tutor for you, because you cannot hope to do this without help.

Kitos.
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[Samiralbayati]

Hi kitos

Please can you correct it and evaluate it.

Actually sometimes I do not care to this tiny mistakes, like, writing peoples names with capital letters, the same thing when I Start writing on new line I must start with capital letters.

To be honest with you I had took an intensive IELTS course before 2 Months.

I will try to minimize these little important mistakes.

What I really want is, that you understand me well, first I must improve my writing skills in the main significant things,like , spelling, good range of vocabulary, clear sentences and then when I start writing good essays I will pay attention to other quite unimportant basics of writing.

I mean writing with capital letter not a problem for me now trust me , these basics of writing even in my Arabic language I do not use them, the most important thing I think is what I wrote. did I cover the topic well or not.

[Kitosdad]

OK, you covered the topic quite well, but it would never be accepted for a TOEFL exam, or ANY exam for that matter. There is NOTHING that is not important in English grammar. I find little wrong with your spelling, but your idea of tenses appears to be your greatest weakness.
Contrary to your belief, if you don't master the basics, then you will never be a competent writer.
Could you so do mathematics if you couldn't multiply?

Do you intend to take an exam soon? I need to know this so that I can help you further.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Samiralbayati]

Hi kitos
please assess my essay and correct it .
I must know my english level.

I will work with your advice,thank you for your help

Indeed I have IELTS in 1552010

[Kitosdad]

What is real love and how to achieve it?

People around the world tend to make relationships with others whether relationship amongst parents and our family relatives or with our lovers, the last one is always between two completely different genders (males and female).

As I mentioned above, I have divided relationships amongst people inTO two sections(.) for this division,
Obviously, love between our nearest friends is different from our wives OR husbands. There is no doubt that nowadays FEWER people believe in relationships(.)
The majority of us think these rapports we have made are endangered(,) and are becoming quite unimportant in this era(.)
They mean that most of our friends are LIARS(.) Actually, they sit and (wake ????) with us just to satisfy us(.) They think of long term profits when they might needs us to support them IN difficult situationS,and really that is the truth of our relationships(.)
we can not deny.
Real love nowadays is almost DIShonest, because of several reasons I will mention them as follows.

Competition in technology leadS us to be selfish(,) and to be more and more competitive(.) for instance,
The Internet has restricted our rapports and makeS us spend most of our daily life in our homes, offices, and other places which are separated from social life(,) and from our external environment.

On the other hand, if we revise (ourselves) and THINK back not too far just before 100 years ago, when the greatest ship IN the world dived TO the bottom of the ocean.
This even can educate us and tell us much about the honest emotions, and real love which happened amongst two beautiful loves who are Jack( LEONARDO DICAPRIO) and Rose( KATE WINSLET) .
They acted very well in this movie(.)
They really have TAUGHT us what love means. When this lady(Rose )loved this guy (Jack) from THE first look(,) and he also exchanged her emotions.in spite of that,
This girl was from aristocracy, while the guy was from A poorER layer in society, but all these differences did not distinguish and eliminate their love(.) Rather that these differences combined them more and more(,) and pushed them to explore their different outlooks, knowledges, THOUGHTS in life.
We must conclude that love doES not know borders between people from different statusES in society.

To sum up, I think that REAL love nowadays HAS almost had faded(.) It is not fair to compare love in one time ago OF YESTERYEAR with love OF TODAY:in our meantime.
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This was nearly good, but your grammar and punctuation was less than poor. If you wish to improve, you must at least learn the basics. I don't care what you think. Without doing so you are wasting my time, and my time is not for wasting.
Knuckle down, or go elsewhere Samiralbayati.

Kitos. 6/10
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