get up early/ late

[Chérie]

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b]Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start a day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer?[/b]

There are a lot of people who begin their day early in the morning. However, others sleep until midday leaving all their work to the second part of a day.

I'am inclined to believe, that it depends on the personal physiology traits of a particular person. Some people are full of energy and enthusiasm exactly in morning hours. They are able to do more work spending less time on it. But at the evening they feel completely off. For another group of people the situation is opposite. Even if they made themselves to start day at seven o'clock in the morning, their first hours, approximatly, would be lost. It's a feeling that you have already waken up, but your brain and organism are still asleep.

Unfortunately, as for me, get or not get up early it's not a matter of choice. The modern way of live made me be always pressed with time, that's why I can not let my self to lose even three or four extra morning hours. Of course, it seems to be impossible to be active from morning until night, nevertheless I found a good solution. If I feel really tired and not able to think clear, I try to find opportunity to sleep for just one hour or forty minutes during the day. After such a break I obtain new power to continue my activities.

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[Kitosdad]

Hello! I'am new here. Could you, please, evaluate my essay. Thank you

b]Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start a day's work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer?[/b]

There are a lot of people who begin their day early in the morning. However, others sleep until midday leaving all their work to the second part of a day.

I AM inclined to believe that it depends on the personal physiology traits of a particular person. Some people are full of energy and enthusiasm exactly in THE EARLY morning hours. They are able to do more work spending less time on it. But atIN the evening they feel completely offLETHARGIC. For another group of people the situation is opposite. Even if they made FORCE themselves to start THEIR day at seven o'clock in the morning, their first hours, approximatEly, would be lost. It's a feeling that you have already wOken up, but your brain and organism are still asleep.

Unfortunately, as for me, getTING or not getTING up early IS not a matter of choice. The modern way of live made me be always pressed FOR time, THAT IS why I cannot let myself to lose even three or four extra morning hours. Of course, it seems to be impossible to be active from morning until night, nevertheless I found a good solution.
If I feel really tired and not able to think clearLY, I try to CREATE AN opportunity to sleep for just one hour or forty minutes during the day. After such a break I obtain new power to continue my activities.
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Good morning Cherie.An acceptable essay, but without a conclusion.

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[Chérie]

OH! Thank you!