Would you prefer to marry an unknown person or to a person whom you know.

[Sonav]

Topic : Would you prefer to marry an unknown person or to a person whom you know.

Marriage is the confluence of two people. It is a strong bonding that is meant to stay forever between the partners. Marriage means Love, trust and respect. Some people believe that they should marry an unknown person. But, on contrary, I would prefer to marry a person whom i know. And, this is because, it would be easier for me to spend my whole life with a person whom i am familiar with.

To begin with, if the person is familiar to me then then I would feel comfortable to express my emotions to that person. I would know his nature, his mindset, his way of reaction on a particular situation. I would know what he thinks about me and his feelings for me. And, according to me, this is very important aspect of a successful marriage. For example, whenever there is any argument or fight between us then I would know how to deal with that situation.

Moreover, I also think that compatibility would be better if i know a person in advance. I would marry a person only if i feel that we are compatible with each other. I would know his both sides, good as well as bad. This way, we would develop better understanding and it would be easier for us to stay together.

On the other hand, if the person is unknown to me then his every action would be a kind of surprise for me. Both of us might have entirely different point of views which can lead to problems in our marriage later.

To sum up, marriage is not a short term commitment but a promise made by each other to stay forever. So, I think, It would be a better ida to marry a person whom we know very well as this way we can enjoy the spectacular togetherness forever.


TOEFL listening lectures: A university lecture by a professor of Social History

[Kitosdad]

Topic : Would you prefer to marry an unknown person or to a person whom you know.

Marriage is the confluence of two people. It is a strong bonding that is meant to stay forever between the partners. Marriage means love, trust and respect. Some people believe that they should marry an unknown person. But, On THE contrary, I would prefer to marry a person whom (I) know. And, t This is because it would be easier for me to spend my whole life with a person WITH whom (I) am familiar. with.

To begin with, if the person is familiar to me, then then I would feel comfortable to express my emotions to that person. I would know his nature, his mindset, his way of reaction on TO a particular situation. I would know what he thinks about me and his feelings for me. And, according to me, this is A very important aspect of a successful marriage. For example, whenever there is any argument or fight between us, then I would know how to deal with that situation.

Moreover, I also think that compatibility would be better if (I) ALREADY know a person. in advance. I would marry a person only if (I) feel that we are compatible with each other. I would know his both OF HIS sides, good as well as bad. This way, we would develop better understanding and it would be easier for us to stay together.

On the other hand, if the person is unknown to me, then his every action would be a kind of surprise for me. Both of us might have entirely different point of views which can lead to problems LATER in our marriage. later.

To sum up, marriage is not a short term commitment but a promise made TO each other to stay TOGETHER forever. So, I think it would be a better idEa to marry a person whom we know very well, as this way we can enjoy the LOVING togetherness forever.
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Good morning Sonav. This was indeed a very good essay. I am dismayed to see that you are still using lower case "i". This is a practice you should correct immediately.
Your punctuation could also do with some attention. Far better to not use a comma at all if you are unsure of the position it should take.

Kitos. 8.5/10
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[Lubov]

Good morning Sonav.
You have written a wonderful essay and you expressed your idea very clearly.

Congratulation.

Lubov
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[Sonav]

Thanks Kitos. I would definitely work on the mistakes and would try not to repeat them. I agree that using lower case "i" is a silly mistake and I would keep in mind that next time. (I would not make you feel that way again :) )

Lubov : Thanks a lot for your comments. I am glad that you liked it. You are one of them who always inspire me to write better.


P.S. : Whenever I post any essay, I am so eager to see the result. It is 6:00 am here and I can not believe that I am replying to the comments. Quite strange but nice.