What do you think your life will be like after retirement? Use reasons and detail

[Priyasathiya]

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Hi Kitos,

Sorry for posting an audio trial in essay section..
I have posted 2 audio trials for suggestion, in listening and speaking section yesterday, but still I have not receive any comment.. Am eager to know the comments, because this is the second time am posting my speech. During my first trial I got comment from you like, I just spoke too fast and you cannot understand even a word. So, will you please give suggestion for me in this speech and rank me ....

Also I have one doubt like, Is there any limitations for essay or audio post per day..

My topic for today is, 'What do you think your life will be like after retirement?'. Use reasons and details to support your response.

Thankyou

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[Kitosdad]

Good morning Priyasathiya. I think your microphone is too close to your mouth. This time I could hear what you were saying, but it was distorted a little. You sound better talking more slowly though.

Please limit yourself to three essays per day.

Kitos.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Priyasathiya]

Thankyou.
I will follow the same speed from now for my practice..
How about my pronunciation and accent, also am I giving break where-ever needed..
Also I posted 2 more speech in listening and speaking section yesterday..Will you please give suggestions for those also..please

[Kitosdad]

Your biology talk was by far the better of the two. In the first one you paused before launching into a torrent of words, probably because you were familiar with what you were about to say.
Try to keep a slowish consistent flow. Avoid "ahhing" as much as possible. You have a good clear tone and pronunciation is very good. Just work on acquiring a steady output of words, rather that sudden bursts.
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Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting.

[Priyasathiya]

Thanks a lot Kitos,
Iam sure you are the best teacher I ever met..