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#1 (permalink) Sun May 02, 2010 21:57 pm The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. |
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Good morning kitos
I really appreciate your kindness and how cute you are. please can you assess this graph?
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
Please just click on the link to see the table, so I could not upload it on this site.
http://www.ielts-exam.net/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=621&Itemid=32
The table above illustrates different preferred activities among 8 different counties, the ages of people are in the range of 30 to 50.
We see from the table that Canadian citizens are highly prefer watching TV, the same record for USA also they consider TV as a main preferable one, the same thing is in Australia which is attracted by TV a little more that both Canada and USA do.
Unfortunately, sleep, music and beach are rated as unlikable activities at all between the counties, except USA which is a bit keen on them, as well as for Ausralia but they like going to the beach only.
Other activities are ranged from a slight preferable to unpractical among some countries, for example, both England and france do not have shared to this survey, as well as japan which is surprisingly do not have any sharing in the these favorite pastime activities only in reading, admittedly they are literates.
In conclusion, obviously I can figure out that people have different desires toward these activities, but nearly all of them they are highly prefer hobbies and reading.
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Samiralbayati I'm here quite often ;-)

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#2 (permalink) Sun May 02, 2010 22:19 pm The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countri |
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The table above illustrates different preferred activities among 8 different counties, the ages of people INVOLVED are in the range of 30 to 50.
We see from the table that Canadian citizens are highly prefer watching TV, the same record for NUMBER OF INDIVIDUALS IN THE USA also consider TV as THE PREFERRED MEDIUM(.) The same thing is NUMBER in Australia which is ARE attracted by TV(,) a little more that both CANADIANS and AMERICANS.
Unfortunately, sleep, music and beachES are rated as UNATTRACTIVE activities between the counties, except USA which is a bit MORE THAN keen on them(.) well as for AusTraliaNS but they ONLY like going to the beach.
Other activities are ranged from a slightLY preferable to IMpractical among some countries(.) For example, both England and France do not have NOT shared IN this survey(.) ALSO JapanESE WHO is surprisingly dID not SHOW any sharing INTEREST in the these favorite pastime activities(,) OTHER THAN reading(.) admittedly they are literates.
In conclusion, obviously I can figure out that people have different desires toward these activities, but nearly all of them they are highly prefer hobbies and reading. :::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::: You really should be doing this yourself. You will never improve depending on others to complete your work. This is the last time! _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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Kitosdad Language Coach

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#3 (permalink) Sun May 02, 2010 23:06 pm The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. |
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Hi MR.kitosdad
I am sorry about this poor essay, really I am weak in descirping graphs, tables, and figures.
But I did not understand your comment well, I never have thought to post other poeple essays this essay was mine, I only target you to the original website of it in order to see the table.
Please, please, please I just want you to sustain me, I am trying hard to satisfy you. |
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Samiralbayati I'm here quite often ;-)

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#4 (permalink) Mon May 03, 2010 4:32 am The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in different countries. |
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Good morning Samiralbayati. I don't think I implied this was the work of someone else. I asked if it was homework. If it is, I suggested that you do it yourself. If you so desperately need help with this type of problem, then of course I will continue helping you.
Kitos. _________________ Keep it simple ... Keep it interesting. |
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