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Personal Profile (Unit 3) Thu Aug 21, 2008 20:10 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

goldenjewel wrote:
Hi Torsten,

I'm Julie.
I'm 20.
I'm a female.
I'm from Nigeria.
I'm a student studying petroleum engineering.
I'm tall.
I'm not married.
I'm interested in improving, on my English writing skills.

Smile

Hi Julie,

Thanks a lot for posting your personal profile which looks very good. Here are just a couple of suggestions:

goldenjewel wrote:
I'm a female.

I'm a woman.

goldenjewel wrote:
I'm interested in improving, on my English writing skills.

I'm interested in improving my written English.

Please let me know what you think.
Regards,
Torsten
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Personal Profile (Unit 3) Thu Aug 21, 2008 20:12 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Analee wrote:
I'm Analee
I'm 25 years old
I'm from Cambodia.
I'm interested in learning English. I hope you can help me. Thanks

Best regards,
Analee

Dear Analee,

Many thanks for joining our forum. Your personal profile looks very good and the only thing I'd like to remind you about is this: Please put a full stop (period) at the end of each sentence.

If you like, you can tell me more about life in Cambodia. What do you do and why do you want to improve your English?

I look forward to your next forum posts.
Regards,
Torsten
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introduction Thu Aug 21, 2008 21:00 pm  introduction
 

shafqat wrote:
HI Good after noon
I'm Shafqat
I'm from Pakistan.
I'm working as an Assistant Manager in MOBILINK (Pakistan)
I have been working for the last three month in this segment
I have also worked customer services as well as direct sales postpaid corporate sector
I got master degree in economics.
My achievements are I have got first position till four years
I have been working in retails sector
I believe in only hardworking devotion and strong follow-up to get maximum result.

Regards
S.A Khan: lol

Dear S.A. Khan,

Thanks a lot for posting your personal profile which looks very good. Please find my suggestions below.

shafqat wrote:
HI Good after noon

Hi, good afternoon.

shafqat wrote:
I'm Shafqat

I'm Shafqat.

shafqat wrote:
I'm working as an Assistant Manager in MOBILINK (Pakistan)

I work as an Assistant Manager for Mobilink Pakistan.

shafqat wrote:
I have been working for the last three month in this segment

I've been doing this job for the last three months.

shafqat wrote:
I have also worked customer services as well as direct sales postpaid corporate sector

I have also worked in Customer Service as well as in the sales department where I sold postpaid services and products to corporate clients.

shafqat wrote:
I got master degree in economics.

I have a master degree in economics.

shafqat wrote:
My achievements are I have got first position till four years

One of my achievements is the fact that I have hold a top position for four years.

shafqat wrote:
I have been working in retails sector

I have also worked in the retail sales sector.

shafqat wrote:
I believe in only hardworking devotion and strong follow-up to get maximum result.

I believe that only hard work and excellent customer service can produce top results.

Let me know what you think.
Regards,
Torsten
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Personal Profile (Unit 3) Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:45 am  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Dear Torsten,

First, thanks for your advice me. I work as customer service, I really want to impove my English because I want to upgrade my job. My English is poor, so it is hard for me to work with foreigner. I can not speak and write in English very well, I need to improve a lot. I hope you can help me.
If we talking about life in Cambodia, it is good like the weather, social.....and has many places for relex.

Last, I would like to ask about you where do you come from ? and beside a teacher, what do you do ?

Thanks for your reply.

Regards/ Analee
Analee
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Joined: 20 Aug 2008
Posts: 3

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Fri Aug 22, 2008 8:00 am  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Dear Analee,

Many thanks for sharing your experiences with me. I think your English already pretty good given the fact that your mother tongue is completely different than English. For Europeans it's much easier to learn English than it is for Asians so you are doing an excellent job. Please don't say that your "English is poor" because learning English is a process and your English is much better now than it was when you started learning the language. If you like, you can read about my language learning experiences here.

I look forward to hearing more about you. What company do you work for and what exactly do you do? As for me, I spend most of my time working here on our website.

Regards,
Torsten
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Personal Profile (Unit 3) Sat Aug 23, 2008 5:15 am  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Dear Torsten,

Thanks for your word but I still think that my English is not verry good. You know ! I'm hard to talk with foreigner, I can't say for what I want to say because of my poor English. Sometime, I am so angry my self.
Actualy, I work for CMA-CGM French Line as a export customer service. I handle for all export shipments and follow up with nomination customer.

Well, have a nice weekend.

Regards,
Analee
Analee
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Joined: 20 Aug 2008
Posts: 3

Simple Present Tense Sat Aug 23, 2008 12:17 pm  Simple Present Tense
 

Hello Torsten,

As i read my email, i realize that learning english is not like saving energy, 5 hours in one month better than every 5 minute per day... That is good.

I am Teguh. I work for G2 in marketing department. This jobs over me more reliable time for do the job. I am for one year joinning this company. I do for 8 people behind me. Our company usually for 8 working hours in 5 days a week. The core bussines of this company is trading valve FAF in Jakarta, valve mtorised honeywell etc.
I am interesting for learning english so much because of our demand of build is arise in this country.

Thanks.
Indonesiateguh
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Joined: 31 Jul 2008
Posts: 4

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Sat Aug 23, 2008 15:20 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Analee wrote:
Dear Torsten,

Thanks for your word but I still think that my English is not verry good. You know ! I'm hard to talk with foreigner, I can't say for what I want to say because of my poor English. Sometime, I am so angry my self.
Actualy, I work for CMA-CGM French Line as a export customer service. I handle for all export shipments and follow up with nomination customer.

Well, have a nice weekend.

Regards,
Analee

Dear Analee,

Thank you for sharing your experiences with me. You are doing an excellent job in describing your situation in English and I can understand everything you are saying. There is no need to be angry with yourself. Just enjoy the fact that you are able to express your thoughts in English and that you are determined to improve your skills.

There are a few simple steps you can take to improve your English immediately. The first one is to start using a spell checker. I myself have been using the the free spell checker provided by Firefox and thanks to that all my forum messages are free of any spelling mistakes. You can do the same. Please tell me what you think.

Regards,
Torsten
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Personal Profile (Unit 3) Sat Aug 23, 2008 17:43 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Hello everybody!
My name Jeanstrang, but you can call me Trang.
I'm 16.
I'm from Viet Nam.
I am going to Le Quy Don high School in Da Nang.
I am not tall and not short.
I haven't got married.
I am keen on listening to music, reading books, watching cartoon and Science program, read comic,.ect.
Nice to acquaint with you,
Trang.
Jeanstrang
I'm new here and I like it ;-)


Joined: 15 Aug 2008
Posts: 25
Location: Viet Nam

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Sun Aug 24, 2008 18:15 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

I'm Abduljalil Sireis.
I'm 25 years old.
I'm from Syria.
I'm an Electrical Engineer.
I'm not married.
I'm interested in english-test forum.
I hope to do my postgraduate studies in Germany.
Kentman
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Joined: 15 Aug 2008
Posts: 6

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Mon Aug 25, 2008 16:24 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Hi Torsten

Thanks for your reply. I have taken note of the corections you made.

julie
Goldenjewel
I'm new here and I like it ;-)


Joined: 18 Aug 2008
Posts: 10

Hello! Tue Aug 26, 2008 18:38 pm  Hello!
 

Hello Torsten
My name is Linh
I'm from Vietnam.
I'm a student of Academy of Finance.
My favorite hobbies is reading news, listening to music, watching cartoon... Especially, I like traveling and taking a photograph.
I have begun to learn English since 1998. I had a long time to learn English,
I realize that learning English wasn't difficult. I learned English fastly.
But I haven't learned English some years recently. Because I didn't know the important role of English in the life.
Now, I want to get back what I have before.
I'm interested in studying about financial field. I want to become a good financial manager. I often read English financial news to practice English and get experience about finance. But it is difficult to understand all, because there are so much new words. Each word has many meaning, I don't know the exact its meaning.
Could you tell me how do i do now to translate accurately ?
May be there are some mistakes above, could you correct it for me?
Thank you so much!
Have a good day!
Linh
Kimiu87
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Joined: 13 Aug 2008
Posts: 5

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Tue Aug 26, 2008 22:22 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

hallo,
I am Mohamud Sheik.
I am from somalia.
I am 36 years old.
I am married and 183 cm tall.
I am intrested in to participate in human life standard improvment,
I want to make beter my english language
Mahad
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Joined: 18 Aug 2008
Posts: 2

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Wed Aug 27, 2008 10:42 am  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

Hi everyone. I hope all of you are very well. My name is Abdulmajeed, you can call me Abdul. I am from Saudi Arabia. I am 20 years old. I am not too tall and not too short. I am average. I'm not married yet. These days actually I am in Canada. I have been in Canada for 6 months. I take English language program. And then I am going to go to University of Alberta to Study Business Administration. I am going to stay in Canada 5 years later. I'm interested in learning English from anywhere.
Abdull
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Joined: 27 Aug 2008
Posts: 1

Personal Profile (Unit 3) Wed Aug 27, 2008 16:15 pm  Personal Profile (Unit 3)
 

I'm Roger Lopez.
I'm 24years old.
I'm from Peru.
I'm an employee in an company.
I'm tall.
I'm single.
I'm interested in learning more English.
Rlopez
New Member


Joined: 19 Aug 2008
Posts: 4

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