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| shade wrote: | I'm Shade.
I'm 21 years old.(or:I'm 21)
I'm from Myanmar.
I'm a bit tall.
I'm single.
I'm interested in computing,highest techanology and languages.
How about me?Am i right? |
Dear Shade,
Many thanks for posting your personal profile which doesn't contain any mistakes. The only thing I've found is the phrase "highest technology". Could you please tell me what you mean by that?
Also, please remember that the personal pronoun is always capitalized.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| Wed Jul 02, 2008 18:44 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| m1958t wrote: | I'm Moh'd Ahmed
I'm 50 years old.
I'm from Syria.
I'm working in governmental organization in UAE.
I'm not tall.
I'm married.
I'm interesting in sports and computer. |
Dear Moh'd Ahmed,
Many thanks for posting your personal profile. I've found only two minor things:
| m1958t wrote: | | I'm working in governmental organization in UAE. |
This sentence should be in the present simple:
I work for a government organization in UAE.
| m1958t wrote: | | I'm interesting in sports and computer. |
I'm interested in sports and computers.
Hope this helps.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| Wed Jul 02, 2008 18:54 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| Dema Betar wrote: | hi ,
I am Dema Al_betar
I am from jordan
I am 22 years old
I am student at uni of jordan
I am not married
I am not tall and not short , my tall is 165 cm
I am care about the deaf and children |
Dear Dema Al_betar,
Thanks a lot for creating and posting your personal profile. Please remember to put a full stop at the end of each sentence. Here are some more suggestions I'd like to make:
| Dema Betar wrote: | | I am student at uni of jordan |
I'm a student at Jordan University.
| Dema Betar wrote: | | I am not tall and not short , my tall is 165 cm |
I am neither tall nor short, I am 165 cm tall. (Or: my height is 165 cm).
| Dema Betar wrote: | | I am care about the deaf and children |
I like children and I often help deaf people.
Please let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| Wed Jul 02, 2008 20:50 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hello
I'm Iván González
I'm from Medellín, Colombia
I'm happily married
I'm 65 years old
I'm friendly
I'm here because I want to improve my English
I'm like to listen music |
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Posts: 8
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| Wed Jul 02, 2008 23:06 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hello Torsten,
I've been reading all of the posts added by the other users and I don't know if what I'm about to write goes against the rules of this forum, but the answer for your question about what Shade means by "HIGHEST TECHNOLOGY", is that "He is interested in CUTTING-EDGE TECHNOLOGY".
Hope this helps.
Regards,
ENGLISH4ME |
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Posts: 1
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| Wed Jul 02, 2008 23:32 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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I'm souad.
I'm 33 years old ( I'm 33.)
I'm from Algeria.
I'm an english teacher.
I'm tall.
I'm married.
I'm iterested in reading novels, poems and watching classical movies. |
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Souad
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 29
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 0:21 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hi
I am Moeen
From Palestine
51 years of age
married + 11 kids (very happy with them! Knock on wood!!!!)
In fact 13 kids but 2 have got married recently.
I am very fond of English ,music, computer and photography. |
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Muin
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 08 Jul 2007
Posts: 17
Location: Gaza Strip
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 1:48 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hi,
I'm Souad.
I'm 33 years old.
I'm from Algeria.
I'm a teacher at the middle school.
I'm married.
I'm interested in reading novels, poems and watching classical films. |
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Souad
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 29
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:36 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hi,
I'm Kim Ngan. I come from Viet Nam
I am 24 years old.
I am a legal consultant at the securities company.
I'm single. Sometimes i feel bored and alone abit.
I want to make friends with everyone here. |
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Kimnganvgs
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 12
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 4:48 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) Introduce myself |
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Hi Torsten,
I'm Hung (My English name is Handy Man)
I live in the South of Vietnam
I'm married and have 2 daughter
I'm 40 years old and working for insurance corporation
I'm working as an IT manager, my habit is learning English and try to improve my English.
I like playing football and play 2 or 3 times a week.
Anyway, thanks for your English support.
Bye |
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Hnhung
New Member
Joined: 02 Jul 2008
Posts: 3
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:41 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hey everyone!
I'm Manh Dung Nguyen
I'm 17 years old.
I'm from Hanoi, Vietnam.
I'm single!
I'm studying at HUS High School for gifted students.
I'm interested in Mathematics!
Nice to meet you! |
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NguyenDungTN
New Member
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 2
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 5:55 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hello sir,
I'm Ho. I'm form Vietnam, so my nationality is Vietnamese.
I want to improve my English because it is useful for my job.
However, I find it difficult to learn listening and speaking which I need to improve most. I thank you a lot for what you sent me through the email, but I couldn't find the exercises as you wrote. Please help me with them.
Thank you so much. |
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Hothu
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 05 Mar 2008
Posts: 49
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:02 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| Good day! I'm Ma. Dolores S. Labios, a newest addition, I believe to a huge team of english.net. I became interested in joining as all the topics are very useful and helpful in creating messages and constructing business letters in the office. Thank you and God bless to all. |
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Ma. Dolores S. Labios
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Joined: 03 Jul 2008
Posts: 1
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| Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:39 am Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hello sir,
I'm Minh Tu. I'm a doctor. I'm 42 years old. I' m from Hochiminh city,Vietnam.
I have 2 children. They are still very young.
My son is 8 years old. He is studying grade 3 in international primary school.
My daughter is 5 years old. She is studying in English kiddy class every morning Saturday and Sunday.
I love English so much. I have been studying English for 3 years. When I
was young I learned French.
I'm interested in studying 3 skills in English: listening, writing and grammar.
I am not good at grammar in English. I both have to work and take care of my children so I don't have enough time to study English but I try to study it 30 minutes every day.
Every day I open my email box I feel very happy when there is a new letter from english-test.net to me. I read it and do some homework.
I 'm going to get a English certificate. This is IELTS (5 point). I try to do that.
Please help me. Thank for your helping me.
sincerity |
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Minhtu
New Member
Joined: 25 Apr 2008
Posts: 7
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