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 #62 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 5:27 am The personal Profile |
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Hello Nguyen Minh Tuan!
I am very glad to be a your friend on this 4rum.
I am vnese,too. I live in Ha Noi.It takes about 2hours to fly HCM city.
I joined this website to learn and improve English.
If you want, we can keep in touch togetther.
My ID is hoatuyet_nd or my email: kimngan85@gmail.com
I'm looking forward to hear you. |
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Kimnganvgs
I'm new here and I like it ;-)
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 12
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| #63 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:32 am personal profile |
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hello everyone,
I am Viet.
I am from Vietnam.
I am 24 years old.
I am tall.
I am not married.
I am a math teacher.
I am interested in studying math.
I want to be a mathematician. |
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Viet
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Joined: 10 Jan 2008
Posts: 2
Location: Vietnam
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| #64 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 13:34 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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hi sir
i am naser
i am engineering bts
i am from Egypt
i am from 20 years old
i am tall
i am not married
i am very intersted by MCSE,CCNA
I AM WORKING IN VODAFONE |
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Joined: 23 Apr 2008
Posts: 3
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| #65 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 14:13 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| Marmaritaa wrote: |
Hello
I'm Mai
I'm 21
I'm from Egypt
I'm have a degree of Business Administration
I'm Not tall , not short
i'm single
I'm interested in learning languages |
Dear Mai,
Thanks a lot for joining our forum and submitting your personal profile. It looks very good so keep up the great work! Please remember that every sentence ends with a full stop (.) Here are some more suggestions:
| Marmaritaa wrote: |
| I'm have a degree of Business Administration |
I have a degree in business administration.
| Marmaritaa wrote: |
| I'm Not tall , not short |
I'm neither tall nor short.
| Marmaritaa wrote: |
| i'm single |
I'm single.
| Marmaritaa wrote: |
| I'm interested in learning languages |
That's excellent  !
Best regards,
Torsten
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| #66 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 14:20 pm Introduction |
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| Louis wrote: |
Hello
I'm Louis
I'm from Sudan
I'm 29 years old
I'm Mechanical Engineer
I'm 180cm tall
I;m interested in learing english language on line, and I would like to inform you that I received all the lessions from one to three and they were understod.in test one I got 7 scors and the same scors also in test two.
thank you very much for your help. |
Dear Louis,
Thanks a lot for joining our forum and welcome to engllish-test.net! I see that you have posted your personal profile which looks great. There are just a few things I'd like to point out. Most importantly: Please remember to end every sentence with a full stop (.) Here are some more suggestions:
| Louis wrote: |
| I'm Mechanical Engineer |
I'm a mechanical engineer.
| Louis wrote: |
| I;m interested in learing english language on line, and I would like to inform you that I received all the lessions from one to three and they were understod.in test one I got 7 scors and the same scors also in test two. |
I'm interested in learning English online and I would like to let you know that I understood all the three lessons I received from you. In both tests I got 7 correct answers.
That's great news, Louis. I look forward to your next forum posts.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| #67 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 14:40 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| Woranuch wrote: |
Hi,
My name is Woranuch.
I'm 30 years old.
I'm working with NGO organization.
I'm Thai.
I'm single.
I'm interested in human resource management.
Good to share with you.
Bye |
Dear Woranuch,
Thank you for joining our forum and submitting your personal profile which looks great. There's only one minor little thing I'd like to point out:
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| I'm working with NGO organization. |
I work for an NGO organization. If you work for the organization on a regular basis, it's better to use the simple present. If it's a temporary job, you can use the present progressive as you did in your sentence.
Please let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| #68 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 14:57 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| 1msh23 wrote: |
Dear sir
How are you?
I am mohammed Musthafa
I am 26 years old
I am from Kerala, India
I am studying for law
I have completed my graduation in philosophy
I am not married
I like stud languages, especially for english language because their world wide recognition
I like English Language because of their rich heritage
I like English Language because I can communicate to anyone in this world
I like English Language because english speaking people considered as a civilized in society in third world countries.
Finally, I would remain thankful to you, if you will make corretion in my writing.
Best wishes for all
Bye....Bye............
Musthafa |
Dear Musthafa,
Many thanks for your joining our forum and posting your personal profile. You did a very good job and I have only a few suggestions: Please don't forget to put a full stop (.) at the end of each sentence. Also, you might consider using a spell checker. Here are some more ideas:
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I am mohammed Musthafa |
I'm Mohammed Musthafa.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I am studying for law |
I'm a law student.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I have completed my graduation in philosophy |
I have a degree in philosophy.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I like stud languages, especially for english language because their world wide recognition |
I like studying languages, especially English because it is recognized around the world.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I like English Language because of their rich heritage |
I like the English language because of its interesting history.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I like English Language because I can communicate to anyone in this world |
I like the English language because I can use it communicate with people from around the world.
| 1msh23 wrote: |
| I like English Language because english speaking people considered as a civilized in society in third world countries. |
I like the English language because in third world countries English speaking people are considered to be civilized.
Let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| #69 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 14:59 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Hi
My name is Neha
I'm fom INDIA
I'm 22yrs old
Iam a dentist
Iam single
Iam interested in learning English online n woulld like to let u know that i have gone through all the lessons.
thanking you for your guidance. |
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Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 2
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| #70 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 15:06 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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Dear Neha,
Thanks a lot for joining our forum and posting your personal profile. It looks very good so keep up the great work! Please remember to end every sentence with a full stop (.)
Here are some more suggestions:
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| I'm fom INDIA |
I'm from India.
| Nehal wrote: |
| I'm 22yrs old |
I'm 22 years old.
| Nehal wrote: |
| Iam a dentist |
I'm a dentist.
I'm single.
| Nehal wrote: |
| Iam interested in learning English online n woulld like to let u know that i have gone through all the lessons. |
I'm interested in learning English online and would like to let you know that I have gone through all the lessons.
Please let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten
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| #72 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 15:12 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| thank you for guidance. |
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Nehal
New Member
Joined: 26 Jun 2008
Posts: 2
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| #73 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 15:40 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| Hello. I'm Adriana. I'm from Malaysia. I'm going to be unattached soon and hope to make new friends. I work for a multi-national company as an Executive Secretary and Administrator. I am currently attending Mandarin classes. I'm also interested to learn and improve my English here. |
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Adryana
New Member
Joined: 14 Sep 2007
Posts: 6
Location: Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia
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| #74 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 17:31 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| ENGLISH4ME wrote: |
Hello Torsten,
I've been reading all of the posts added by the other users and I don't know if what I'm about to write goes against the rules of this forum, but the answer for your question about what Shade means by "HIGHEST TECHNOLOGY", is that "He is interested in CUTTING-EDGE TECHNOLOGY".
Hope this helps.
Regards,
ENGLISH4ME |
Hello ENGLISH4ME,
Thank you very much for your great support! It's so good to hear you have read all the posts in this thread and I'm glad you've pointed out that Shade wanted to say "cutting-edge technology". This makes perfect sense. So, yes this is exactly what the forum is all about -- sharing ideas and learning from each other.
I look forward forward to your next posts.
Regards,
Torsten
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| #75 (permalink) Fri Jul 04, 2008 18:09 pm Personal Profile (Unit 3) |
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| vanvuong wrote: |
hi!
I'm Van.
I'm from Vietnam.
I'm 21 years old.
I'm learning graphic design.I like it and i like learning English language,too.I hope i'll speak and listen english fluently.
I'm 170cm tall
I'm not married |
Hello Van,
Many thanks for joining our forum and posting your personal profile. You did a great job and I'd only like to point out some minor things:
| vanvuong wrote: |
| I'm learning graphic design.I like it and i like learning English language,too.I hope i'll speak and listen english fluently. |
I study graphic design and I like learning English, too. I hope I'll soon be able to speak English fluently. I also want to improve my listening skills.
Let me know what you think.
Best regards,
Torsten
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