| #1 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 15:12 pm In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students...
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In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
As a natural principle, younger people will be employees in the future. Therefore, having jobs while they are still students that will help them get more experience for job, and explore their abilities through it. Due to these reasons, I agree that teenagers should have jobs during in school time.
Firstly, having part-time jobs, teenagers will get many experiences. Thank to these experiences, they feel more confidence and easily adapt with new environment in companies when starting main job. Instead, they are always shocked, since there is a big difference in environment between studying in school and working in companies. For example, joining in a team who are responsible for introducing a new product of a company, they will know how to work in a team. Namely, they will understand what they must do or support team mate to finish their job in high result. These things are similar such a mission which they will take in jobs in the future. Thus, it is very necessary for them to get good job because of having good preparation.
Secondly, teenagers will explore their abilities through jobs which there are not enough conditions to express in school. Especially, it is very important for some students who can not earn high score in exams, whereas, they can do jobs very well in reality. This mean those students will also be good employees in the future, even not good students. In the other hand, they will know which their strong or weak points are through jobs. From that, they can improve their abilities to become not only an excellent student, but also a useful man.
In summary, students have a jobs is better than they do not have. Since, these experiences that they get these from jobs. This will help them have good preparations for jobs in the future. Also, they can know about their abilities to improve them to be perfect man.
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