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#2 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 20:32 pm Doesn't a comma come after when? |
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Strictly speaking I'd say there should be, though modern thinking seems to be to use commas less frequently. Lots of these questions seem to leave them out where they should be though - like the missing commas either side of the phrase 'but unsuspecting'.
The bear was eating from a berry bush(,) when he was suddenly startled by the scent of the approaching, but unsuspecting, hikers. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#3 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 22:59 pm Doesn't a comma come after when? |
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Two commas were missing and the question has been revised. _________________ One Way of Learning English Grammar
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#4 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 23:08 pm Doesn't a comma come after when? |
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Hi Linda,
Have you seen this thread? 'to stance'
Are you also able to revise the question under discussion there? _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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#5 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 23:11 pm Doesn't a comma come after when? |
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Can you send this link to Torsten? Thanks for letting us know about it. _________________ One Way of Learning English Grammar
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#6 (permalink) Mon May 17, 2010 23:13 pm Doesn't a comma come after when? |
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Will do, thanks. _________________ Cheers m' dears! |
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