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nice place, location in thuringia Germany #1 (permalink) Thu May 20, 2010 22:15 pm   nice place, location in thuringia Germany
 

Hi,
you can help me. I woud like this one to explain my location to friends and acquaintances. My text is all right?

The Gehege, the oldest national park of Nordhausen, extends in an extension of about 16 hectares on the western side of the upper town. This park with its stock of old, mighty trees is connected to the Nordhausens' history of civilization of the last 160 years on the narrowest one. The concert place is surrounded by thick tree population. In an original fusion of event place and restaurants in the midst of this naturalness a particularly comfortable ambiance offers itself to the visitor. The hilly land was still bald by the middle of the 18th century. On the highest elevation this one was planted in the 14th century only a tree shade donated in summer. North house shoemakers met principally under this tree to 1736. You resin celebrated events and enjoyed the panoramic look pre-country over this. One started with the reafforestation of the area after 1738. Citizen must the municipal authority plant at least six trees disposed, every prospective or new married. In the course of the decades a national park arose. Late the enclosure place and walks in all directions.
1817 of one of the first doing gymnastics places of Germany arose on the enclosure place. 1829 became the enclosure place for the cultural centre of the town modified. Modest restaurants were made these got more and more modern within the next decades to this day it.
Since 1830 concerts regularly take place on the big place. Two concert halls, a fountain and the gas lighting became builtly 1861. To this day, its attractiveness has not lost the enclosure as a cultural centre. Much confessed artists concerts from this in and foreign countries to here. (Fleet Wood Mac, Tom Johns, Chris Normen, Rubettes, Karat, Pudhys etc..) The guests around the place spoil the restaurants with an international kitchen.

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nice place, location in thuringia Germany #2 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 14:02 pm   nice place, location in thuringia Germany
 

ETandmore wrote:
Hi,
you can help me. I woud like this one to explain my location to friends and acquaintances. My text is all right?


Hello ETT,
I've had to guess at exactly what you mean in a few sentences here and there, I'm afraid. Hopefully I haven't changed your meaning:


The Gehege, the oldest national park of Nordhausen, extends in an extension of for about 16 hectares on the western side of the upper town. This park with its stock of old, mighty trees is connected to the Nordhausens' history of civilization of the last 160 years on the narrowest one (I'm sorry, but I don't understand what you mean by this phrase, however it doesn't seem as if there would be a problem leaving it out.). The concert place area/building (Use 'area' if it is outdoors or 'building' if it is indoors) is surrounded by thick tree a dense population of trees. In an original fusion The combination of event place activity areas and restaurants in the midst of this naturalness landscape offers a particularly comfortable ambiance offers itself for the visitor. The hilly land was still bald by the middle of the 18th century. On the highest elevation stood one shady tree which this one was planted in the 14th century only a tree shade donated in summer.
North house shoemakers met principally regularly under this tree to until 1736, where they celebrated events and enjoyed the panoramic views look pre-country over this. One started with the reafforestation of the area after. From 1738 a decision was taken to reforest the area and every prospective or newly married citizen was obliged to plant at least six trees, by order of the municipal authority disposed, every prospective or new married. Thus, in the course of the decades a national park arose. Later followed the enclosed areas and walks and trails in all directions.
In 1817 of one of the first doing gymnastics places German gymnasiumsy arose in the activity area. In 1829 the enclosure became the new home for the cultural centre of the town modified. Modest restaurants were made built. These got more and became gradually more modern within the next following decades and up to the present day.decades to this day it.
Since 1830, concerts have regularly taken place in the main area on the big place. Two concert halls, a fountain and the gas lighting became builtly were added in 1861.
To this day, its attractiveness has not lost ensured that the enclosure has remained a cultural centre. Guests are spoiled with a choice of restaurants which between them boast an international cuisine.
Famous artists from Germany and from foreign countries have performed concerts from this in and foreign countries to here. (Fleetwood Mac, Tom Jones, Chris Norman, The Rubettes, Karat and The Puhdys are some of the famous stars who have performed here.)

The Gehege, the oldest national park of Nordhausen, extends for about 16 hectares on the western side of the upper town. This park with its stock of old, mighty trees is connected to Nordhausens' history of civilization of the last 160 years. The concert area is surrounded by a dense population of trees. The combination of activity areas and restaurants in the midst of this natural landscape offers a particularly comfortable ambiance for the visitor.
The hilly land was still bald by the middle of the 18th century. On the highest elevation stood one shady tree which was planted in the 14th century. North house shoemakers met regularly under this tree until 1736, where they celebrated events and enjoyed the panoramic views. From 1738, a decision was taken to reforest the area and every prospective or newly married citizen was obliged to plant at least six trees, by order of the municipal authority. Thus, in the course of decades a national park arose. Later followed the enclosed areas and walks and trails in all directions.
In 1817 one of the first German gymnasiums arose in the activity area. In 1829 the enclosure became the new home for the cultural centre of the town. Modest restaurants were built. These became gradually more modern within the following decades and up to the present day.
Since 1830, concerts have regularly taken place in the main area. Two concert halls, a fountain and gas lighting were added in 1861.
To this day, its attractiveness has ensured that the enclosure has remained a cultural centre. Guests are spoiled with a choice of restaurants which between them boast an international cuisine.
Famous artists from Germany and from foreign countries have performed concerts here. (Fleetwood Mac, Tom Jones, Chris Norman, The Rubettes, Karat and The Puhdys are some of the famous stars who have performed here.)

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