Sung_Tung (All people are susceptible to stress at one time or another...)

[Kitosdad]

All people are susceptible to stress at one time or another. Stress can usually be avoided or dealt with by a new kinds of medicines. That new idea comes to my mind,in THE case of western medicineS . If I had chance to invent something new, I would invent a totalLY new product, named ‘THE Happy Pill’(endorphins).

The first advantage of ‘happy pill’ is that it would relieve your body OF natural pain. Stress and pain are triggers for THE release OF endorphinS. THE ‘Happy pill’ exceptionally cures bad tempers and brain disorderS. Indeed the mental illnessES ARE much more dangerous than physical oneS. When people are stressed and bored, their mind is adversely affected. If they drive a car in a bad and unconscious mood, they can BECOME involveD in an accident. If they lose their temper, they can get angry easily and CREATE CONLICT with other people. If they do normal work under THE control of THEIR brain, they become forgetful. ‘THE Happy pill’ works immediately IN those situations. People can avoid the worst things THAT come to their mind, body and behavior.

ANOther advantage that ‘THE Happy Pill’ brings to us, of the more importanCE, is that it would enhance OUR good mood. It would be great if you could be IN AN euphoric mood all the time. Image that when you arrive home from work, instead of bearing the stress and annoyance, you smile with your relatives and enjoy the family life.

In the today'S market, there are also some kinds of endorphinS, such as anafranil, effexor or paxil. Unfortunately, those so-called ‘Happy PillS’ only make people feel worse rather than happier. It just deprives people’s chance to think, takes away their feelings and even the drug-takers do not know whether they are happy or not. It contains nicotine, that can make people addictive. Those drugs work better with animals, like cats and dogs. However, I wish to invent a totally different ‘Happy Drug’. Its contents would include vitamins, herbs and mixtures of some harmless chemicals. It would significantly bring about the A revolution for IN medical treatment.

Happiness is the most desirable thing in this life, especially in the modern society . People now can live longer but not happier. Thus, this new product would be GOD'S gift for all people who are victims of their own boredom and IT WILL change their LIVES for the better.
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Hurry up with your invention. I am bored.

Kitos. 7.5/10

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[Kitosdad]

All people are susceptible to stress at one time or another. Stress can usually be avoided or dealt with by a new kinds of medicines. That new idea comes to my mind, in case of western medicine . If I had chance to invent something new, I would invent a total new product, named ‘happy pill’(endorphins).

The first advantage of ‘happy pill’ is that it would relieve your body natural pain. Stress and pain are triggers for endorphin release. ‘Happy pill’ exceptionally cures bad tempers and brain disorder. Indeed the mental illness is much more dangerous than the physical one. When people are stressed and bored, their mind is adversely affected. If they drive a car in a bad and unconscious mood, they can involve in an accident. If they lose their temper, they can get angry easily and make confliction with other people. If they do normal work under control of brain, they become forgetful. ‘Happy pill’ works immediately with those situations. People can avoid the worst things come to their mind, body and behavior.

Other advantage that ‘happy pill’ brings to us, of the more important, is that it would enhance good mood. It would be great if you could be euphoric mood all the time. Image that when you arrive home from work, instead of bearing the stress and annoyance, you smile with your relatives and enjoy the family life.

In the today market, there are also some kinds of endorphin, such as anafranil, effexor or paxil. Unfortunately, those so-called ‘happy pill’ only makes people feel worse rather than happier. It just deprives people’s chance to think, takes away their feelings and even the drug-takers do not know whether they are happy or not. It contains nicotine, that can make people addictive. Those drugs work better with animals, like cats and dogs. However, I wish to invent a totally different ‘happy drug’. Its contents would include vitamins, herbs and mixtures of some harmless chemicals. It would significantly bring about the revolution for medical treatment.

Happiness is the most desirable thing in this life, especially in the modern society . People now can live longer but not happier. Thus, this new product would be the god gift for all people who are victims of their own boredom and change their life for the better._

TOEFL listening discussions: A conversation between a student and a university advisor
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[Kulsoom]

A delightful idea and a superb essay.Thankyou Kitos.
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Mrs. Saqib

[Kitosdad]

I don't know what happened, but my edited version of this essay by Tung_Sung is lower in the thread.
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[Kulsoom]

LOLZ Kitos. If you will give such marks to yourself, we will feel like our nine and ten out of ten are just an intention to make us feel better.
:)
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Mrs. Saqib

[Nzuahp]

Hi kulsoom,
I think this is somebody's work kitos has corrected and posted as a new topic.
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[Kulsoom]

I got it now Nzuahp. Thankyou
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Mrs. Saqib

[Nzuahp]

You are welcome.
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[Kitosdad]

You are correct Peter. He sent it to me as a PM, but I posted it for the thread to see it.
We all learn from each other. Even the good ones can learn from others errors.
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[Kitosdad]

[Kulsoom]

Right Kitos, time and dedication both are important. I think obstacles in life make you more enthusiastic to achieve your destiny. If there are no obstacles, one becomes indolent.
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