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#2 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 6:38 am A call to mr.kitos |
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Good morning Sandy. Well, it is certainly far too short to be a TOEFL submission. Both your grammar and sentence structure need some attention, but overall your meaning is easy to understand. I would suggest that you take your time and attempt to post an essay of around 300 words, and we can start from there to correct and help you.
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#3 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 10:13 am A call to mr.kitos |
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Changing THE nature of our work is a double edge weapon
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We usually say "double edged sword", if the intended meaning is "something that has both upsides and downsides"
If you talk about weapons, then anyway it should be "double edged weapon"
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| Furthermore , some of us can not adjust to new places , tasks or people. |
"Adjust" requires the preposition "to" most of the time Also check your spelling with due diligence (you wrote ''deed' in lieu of 'dead' for one thing, the spellchecked falls short of the mark here because both words exist so you always have to do all the spellchecking yourself when you write an essay) _________________ If it's not easy, don't do it!
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#4 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 14:01 pm A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work... |
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Ok mr. kitos I will try thanks for reading it
And thank you also OUR TOURT SYSTEM |
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