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A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work...



 
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A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work... #1 (permalink) Mon May 24, 2010 22:47 pm   A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work...
 

This topic is about changing the nature of your work....What do you think about it mr.kitos is it too short or uncoherence ?It is my third easy but this is the first one I post.

Work is a basic thing in our life that we can not do without it . but sometimes and for certain circumstances force us to change our work and this may destroy our careers or push us up .

Changing nature of our work is a double edge weapon because it will turn our life up side down .In other words, it may let our inert talents release , discover things that we have never known about , meet new people and form new relationships .

In contrast , some people use to get certain amount of money and they might be engaged by loans or have so many responsibilities and this change will put them in a deed end . Furthermore , some of us can not adjust with new places , tasks or people. It will also prevent them from continuing their jobs and let them quit .

In brief changing our work is a mile stone . It might and might not let us go foreword in our jobs But in my point of view , we have to utilize good opportunities and leave bad ones whether we like them or not .

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A call to mr.kitos #2 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 6:38 am   A call to mr.kitos
 

Good morning Sandy. Well, it is certainly far too short to be a TOEFL submission. Both your grammar and sentence structure need some attention, but overall your meaning is easy to understand.
I would suggest that you take your time and attempt to post an essay of around 300 words, and we can start from there to correct and help you.

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A call to mr.kitos #3 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 10:13 am   A call to mr.kitos
 

Sandy1 wrote:
Changing THE nature of our work is a double edge weapon


We usually say "double edged sword", if the intended meaning is "something that has both upsides and downsides"

If you talk about weapons, then anyway it should be "double edged weapon"
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Furthermore , some of us can not adjust to new places , tasks or people.

"Adjust" requires the preposition "to" most of the time
Also check your spelling with due diligence (you wrote ''deed' in lieu of 'dead' for one thing, the spellchecked falls short of the mark here because both words exist so you always have to do all the spellchecking yourself when you write an essay)
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A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work... #4 (permalink) Tue May 25, 2010 14:01 pm   A call to Mr. Kitos. Changing the nature of your work...
 

Ok mr. kitos I will try thanks for reading it

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